Yeah way too many bullets for one of them not to have been hit.

I liked very much.

Awwesome :) Write more H/c ? You pegged the characters good :)

Great depiction of how Winston and Guerrero may disagree about most things, but they are on the same page when it comes to helping Chance. I liked your portrayal of Guerrero's thought process - very calm and pragmatic. Chance catching him in a contemplative moment was nice, too. We don't see much of that from Guerrero on the show, yet you did a good job of keeping it in-character. The only thing that pulled me out of the story a little was that neither Winston nor Guerrero put pressure on the wound; I think they would know to do that, even if they were awaiting supplies to treat Chance properly. But that's a small detail in a very enjoyable story.

Nice job - I just discovered this show yesterday on hulu and really like it. Your characterizations right very true. I hope you'll write more.

Nice story. Fit the feel of the show and the characters as we know them so far quite well. Nice balance of action, dialogue, and description.

This is such an interesting show and I'm glad to see a fanfic for it! We really need to see Chance get some action though - and I don't mean the dodging bullets kind! :)

Very nice. It is hard to find fanfic for this show!

Yay! First Human Target fiction on the site! I enjoyed reading it you did a good job filling in the blanks with believable action. This is your first story? I'll totally be looking forward to reading more from you!

Thanks for the read :)

I am loving this new show, and your story was loads of awesome. it fit perfectly. I am excited to see the characters develop and more people write. I hope that you write more too, because that was really great!

Hi jrogers,

Great Story, I have been checking to see if anyone had written any fanfic for Human Target. I love this show!

Happy Writing

Hooray, Human Target fic! I very much appreciate the added focus on Guerrero here. Nicely done.

Awesome! I'm so stoked there is finally a Human Target story! Keep it up, I can't wait to read more!

Thanks!

Oh, I hope you're gonna continue writing Human Target fics! This was great - you got the voices down and I could totally picture it. And Chance whump - even better!