Reviews for Under Fire
ChaosShay chapter 4 . 2/13/2010
Lol,good chapter.

Cant wait to see what Sean got himself into!
Elkpelt the Wolf-Chalk chapter 4 . 2/12/2010
Still pretty good xD -This short review was signed by Elkpelt-
Beatleboy62 chapter 4 . 2/12/2010
Sean, RED IS A BAD COLOR! Why do you think the big evil button is always red?

Lol, Charmy got PWND.

Good chapter :D
Bolt the Wolf chapter 4 . 2/12/2010
Espio and Tryph-whatever sitting in a tree, i can see the future, good for me!
Elkpelt the Wolf-Chalk chapter 3 . 2/11/2010
Still a good story so far. You should try doing a little side adventure with Sean and company with the Master Emerald being stolen like in Sonic Adventure 2. It would be amusing to see how they'd react. Also, I like your Characters so far, they're pretty intresting. -This review was signed by Elkpelt; Here's a cookie-
Beatleboy62 chapter 3 . 2/10/2010
Lol, when you said they were all relaxing in bikinis, I thought of Sean for a sec wearing a hot pink bikini XD

He would be running around tasting all the fruits, most likely shoving one in Dana's face yelling, "TRY DIS DANA ITS AWSOME!"

I was thinking of something, ya know how pheonixs are reborn from their ashes?

Have Knuckles pet it, it bursts into flames, and he's all like, "OH NOESS I KILLED ITT!"
ChaosShay chapter 3 . 2/10/2010
Lol,Great chapter,and I love Blaze's Sisters and their pets,And so far...,They might be in trouble:)
Bolt the Wolf chapter 3 . 2/10/2010
lol, i was expecting a full on Assault on the castle. XD

but i suppose Stealth is just as effective. like so many emperors of rome, Betrayal is most effective. _
ChaosShay chapter 2 . 2/10/2010
Starting up great,its a good idea too:)

Update soon!;)
Elkpelt the Wolf-Chalk chapter 2 . 2/10/2010
Another good chapter, Shadowroxmysox. The part with Sean knocking the Master Emerald made me giggle a little. -This review was signed by Elkpelt; Here's a cookie-
Beatleboy62 chapter 2 . 2/9/2010
Yes, Sean would do that XD

Keep continuing this!
Bolt the Wolf chapter 2 . 2/9/2010
aw... im not in ( welp, comic relief from Dana, shay and lenin then i suppose.
Elkpelt the Wolf-Chalk chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
For some strange reason the names remind me of 'Legend of Zelda' xD Anyways... I liked this chapter so far, it was pretty easy to read and such. Can't wait for the next chapters! -This review was signed by Elkpelt; Here's a cookie-
Bolt the Wolf chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Lol, i used to know what blazes kingdom was actually called... ill find out on Wikipedia.
Beatleboy62 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
This looks interesting so far :D