Reviews for Under Fire |
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ChaosShay chapter 4 . 2/13/2010 Lol,good chapter. Cant wait to see what Sean got himself into! |
Elkpelt the Wolf-Chalk chapter 4 . 2/12/2010 Still pretty good xD -This short review was signed by Elkpelt- |
Beatleboy62 chapter 4 . 2/12/2010 Sean, RED IS A BAD COLOR! Why do you think the big evil button is always red? Lol, Charmy got PWND. Good chapter :D |
Bolt the Wolf chapter 4 . 2/12/2010 Espio and Tryph-whatever sitting in a tree, i can see the future, good for me! |
Elkpelt the Wolf-Chalk chapter 3 . 2/11/2010 Still a good story so far. You should try doing a little side adventure with Sean and company with the Master Emerald being stolen like in Sonic Adventure 2. It would be amusing to see how they'd react. Also, I like your Characters so far, they're pretty intresting. -This review was signed by Elkpelt; Here's a cookie- |
Beatleboy62 chapter 3 . 2/10/2010 Lol, when you said they were all relaxing in bikinis, I thought of Sean for a sec wearing a hot pink bikini XD He would be running around tasting all the fruits, most likely shoving one in Dana's face yelling, "TRY DIS DANA ITS AWSOME!" I was thinking of something, ya know how pheonixs are reborn from their ashes? Have Knuckles pet it, it bursts into flames, and he's all like, "OH NOESS I KILLED ITT!" |
ChaosShay chapter 3 . 2/10/2010 Lol,Great chapter,and I love Blaze's Sisters and their pets,And so far...,They might be in trouble:) |
Bolt the Wolf chapter 3 . 2/10/2010 lol, i was expecting a full on Assault on the castle. XD but i suppose Stealth is just as effective. like so many emperors of rome, Betrayal is most effective. _ |
ChaosShay chapter 2 . 2/10/2010 Starting up great,its a good idea too:) Update soon!;) |
Elkpelt the Wolf-Chalk chapter 2 . 2/10/2010 Another good chapter, Shadowroxmysox. The part with Sean knocking the Master Emerald made me giggle a little. -This review was signed by Elkpelt; Here's a cookie- |
Beatleboy62 chapter 2 . 2/9/2010 Yes, Sean would do that XD Keep continuing this! |
Bolt the Wolf chapter 2 . 2/9/2010 aw... im not in ( welp, comic relief from Dana, shay and lenin then i suppose. |
Elkpelt the Wolf-Chalk chapter 1 . 2/9/2010 For some strange reason the names remind me of 'Legend of Zelda' xD Anyways... I liked this chapter so far, it was pretty easy to read and such. Can't wait for the next chapters! -This review was signed by Elkpelt; Here's a cookie- |
Bolt the Wolf chapter 1 . 2/9/2010 Lol, i used to know what blazes kingdom was actually called... ill find out on Wikipedia. |
Beatleboy62 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010 This looks interesting so far :D |