Nice!

aww, how sweet :)

Yay! A tag to one of my fav episodes! I love the h/c between the three of them, and the way you wrote the scene makes it all the more plausible. If only they included this in the show! :P

Cute story I loved it.

Very good.

Aww, sweet. :)

I love El! I'm so glad you wrote about her. And you portrayed her so well! Kudos!

Cute! Love Peter's reaction to Neal falling asleep. Keep it up!

nice story...El cares for him as much as Peter does...

*fangirlish squeal* Perfect! What is it about a sleepy/sleeping Neal that is so appealing? I think you captured Elizabeth BEAUTIFULLY! She is so dang hard to write - but you've got it down to perfection! Please write some more little snippets!

I'm glad you gave Neal a little aftermath to his oxygen deprivatation. He recovered too quickly on the show.

Lovely post script.