I thought it was good except the fuck buddies part sora loved roxas but didn't save himself for roxas and vis versa look your awesome guy i just wish you write a soraxroxas or roxasxsora story where there first time and give there virginity to each other m-rated of course

My OTP is AkuRoku but still this story was I nice change. Uke!Roxas is always good you can pair him with Xemnas and he'd still be good.

Do, in reading the fic, and in crying cause it's all sad, and the chracterizatiob was good and I was completely ready to give a spirited review with props.
Then the first thing I see in the authors comments is that the story sucked? O_o You bet I was surprised!
God, if this is what you call sucking, then what do you consider good?! There must be some pretty high standards that you set for yourself.
In all honestly though, I think you should be pretty proud of thisstory xD;;
The characterization bothered me a bit in the beginning, but then as the story progressed, it all worked out.
The concept of complete misunderstandings and jealousy in the trials of love were written andapplief beautifully.
When a fic brings tears, it's a good one! Your grammar was great (though your beta should get props for that) and the concepts that you apply were well done.
I wish I had a bigger vocabulary to describe how awesomely written this story was xD;; I feel like I'm repeating myself, or a lot of words..
I'll probably go check out your other stories sometime in the near future :D

this was really sweet~ not suckish at all~ also love the idea of Roxy as Uke. always have. XD well done on this~

WHAT THE HEll DO YOU MEAN "LACKING"?

lol this just made me happy enough to last for 7 weeks!

Its was so deep and hearing things from Roxas end was really touching! EVERYTHING CONNECTED! Between Ven, why Axel tried to purposely piss off Sora, EVERYTHING!

YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! lol all it was missing was... ((sets off on a safari in the story))... rated M-ness? XD

omgs that was amazing! hmm maybe a sequal!

aw this was really good even though you don't think so. I like this pairing now is so cute

I really liked this story, the emotions you conveyed were quite well done. I had little sympathy for Roxas at the beginning but when you explained his pov a little more it thawed out. I think it was well written. Keep up the good work.

omg! i have been looking EVERYWHERE for a fanfiction with Sora as the seme! this was just beautiful i dont know how to explain from the poem ending or the light shonen ai,i dont know where to start!-it was all unique ya know?though what happened with Roxas was depressing and sad its the reason why it brought Sora and Roxas together !although some might say "cheesy ending" or "lame" i find it fitting~ i like how you used very comforting and loving moments not like making Sora rush into sex because he doesnt wanna hurt Roxas..hm..i think that u should stop doubting yourself though..u did great and it does NOT was very affectionate and loving.

thanks for writing and also keep writing i loved it much!

~MaNgA~

I honestly loved it. I can't say I've been there before but it felt real and heart-felt. _ You're an awsome writer by the way.

Awwh, this story did NOT suck at all!~

I love it when Roxas is the uke, although it is somewhat difficult to imajine Sora as the seme...oh well. (:

i enjoyed this story very much!

great fic. it's not as bad as u say it is, in fact its quite good. _ Ja.

That was so cute and touching! Generally people tend to portray Sora as being very imature or childish, but I think people need to explore more his character, the confession was very good too, the fight scene made it more real.

I loved how you portrayed Sora in this, his devotion and love for Roxas is very touching and cute! Thanks for posting this, it was very good to read! Hope to see more SoraxRoxas!

this was very sweet i love Sora's constant devotion to Roxas. their relation ship started beautifully, I'm so glad i read this story it really made my day

That was great! If it lacked anything, it was an actual lemon, though it's really your choice if you're up for it. This is the first of your stories that I've read so I don't know if you've ever written a lemon before, if you haven't then I hope you'll try writing one soon!