Lmao Dragon Veins. If this wasn’t made in 2010, I’d be sure it was a reference to Fire Emblem.

that was good keep the chapters coming

I can tell the rest of the story is going to be shit. You wrote naruto say he can see chakra but asked what that energy called chakra was? Fuck your dumbass gtfo. And seriously after seeing this go drink some bleach.

Good chapter. Naruto having the Rinnegan is a plus. Although I am curious if Pain will ever tell Naruto his true name of Nagato Uzumaki.
You do have me curious who Naruto will be paired with.
Keep up the good work.

Oh.. Your another one of those writers.. Always making naruto's enemies stronger.. Well I expected to find him fight both the strong and weak as a normal shinobi but apparently another shit writer appeared. Don't care what you think your writing exactly like the other sixteen before you. And yes other sixteen with the same exact story. So I'll be going now. Your just another writer who writes the 1000 worded stories but on an even more annoying level with chapters and more words. That's all.

Please update!

Nagato had more chakra the canon base naruro

This is on my top 5 storie's list. Im quite fasinated to see how it goes. Hope you update it soon at least by 2014 :)

I really like this story, there aren't bashings that make Konoha totally evil, just those who refused to see Naruto as Naruto. Though I really wouldn't mind some Sakura bashing, with how weak she was in the Chunin exams and all...

Please update soon! That would be awesome of you to do! :D

so good hope he beats sausake half to death

Wow that took me awhile to read, and i am a quick reader too. The Chunin Exams will be fun though, getting to see how Kakashi reacts along with the Hokage and Pervy-Sage. I am curious as to how he reacts with Sasuke and Sakura, I mean he doesn't know them but they are still important. (?) I also wonder how Naruto will feel about the village in general and what about Gaara? Will they still need to fight? My only negative thought about the story is that Naruto seems to possess few emotions. You say he is playful and happy but i only saw any evidence of that a few times. So more emotions from Naruto would be good but I still look forward to the next chapter!

Updateeee

*looks at author wiyh the rinnegan eyes with 9 tomoe, 3 on each ring* Update the story, I want to kmow more.

Great story keep up the good work

So when he gets to konoha who's team will naruto be on? Will they just be averge ame genin or an oc. And anybody who reads these reviews, please continue the story.