Dojima: "The hell is my life now"

love it

This is probably one of the best stories I have read in the Persona section- no, this entire website. It reflects exactly what Persona is, down to the basic humanity that makes it unique. Thank you for making my day.

This was just so adorable and heart-warming. What a wonderfully odd family Souji made!

This was really sweet, thanks for writing it. I for one definitely enjoyed it.

This story made me lol, if I may channel the Internet here for a moment. It didn't get as food-porny as I first expected when I got into this, but that is probably pretty hard to get right when writing anyway, so this might actually be better.
I like Housewife-Souji in other stories, too, and I think it was good that you addressed Dojima's ambivalence towards suddenly having somewhat like that in his life again. I don't think they showed it in his all that much, but to me it always seemed as if his fears mainly focused on just Nanako. It makes much more sense if his issues extend further than that.
So yeah. Nice, short story. Have some appreciation.

A-Aaaaww somehow I can't help but smile at this fic.
A nice, refreshing view of Dojima's! And I like your style of using Souji's culinary skills (now I kind of imagine Souji to be chef when he grow up /shot) as its main point
I like the details, such as Dojima's thoughts, the lunchboxes that Souji prepared, the point that Souji fed half of Inaba everyday-okay, just kidding, but yeah.
Somehow, I can just imagine this fic in manga format because how cannon it sounded XD uurgh if only I could draw-

Thanks for the fic! You're awesome.
-eneresy

the greatest story ever XD

I think I just d'awww'd harder with this P4 fic than I have in any other since I started reading 'em.

Nicely hints upon a more realistic, less blank-slate Souji without going overboard on the melodrama outside of the canon of the universe. And Dojima coming to grips with Souji not just through talking at night, but through Souji's kindness is also awesome.

Amazing job, I really enjoyed reading.

Until next.

Oh god this is so cute.

From watching game clips on Youtube, Dojima's social link is one of my favorites. It really made me feel happy, and this story did the exact same thing. I like Dojima (actually most P4 characters), so this whole story was up my alley.

I really loved it! Souji is so cute, also I love his cooking skills! I kind of wish you would write more Persona fanfic, since all three of your stories are just really really REALLY good! I liked Dojima's feelings and how they changed over the course of the story. Also, your characterizations are on spot! I really loved it!

Wonderfully adorable, and a great (and realistic way!) of imagining Dojima's reactions to Souji throughout the months. I know it was hinted at throughout the game, but I like this version better. )

And yes, now I am feeling quite hungry after reading this! D

amazing! i think i got cavity!

nice alternate story from the game :) wanna read some more!