Oh my gosh this was just plain adorable.
You did a great job on how Shiki may have felt. The emotions were great and undoubtedly one of the best fics out there.
Keep up the great work!

Oh. My. God.

This story, it hit home. I know how Shiki feels, having a friend like Eri. It's nicely in character, and overall, it was well done. Really. You just rendered me speechless. Normally I rarely leave reviews...but this is too good to not review. Thanks for writing this and giving me hope that someone might make me feel special too!

Very VERY nice! D

Loved the ending. _

Hey, nice story! I thought it was pretty good. The characters were in character, and it had a good plot and idea around it! It was cute and original!

Overall, great story! Keep on writing!

Bravo! I applaud you with this fiction. You did very well with Neku, portraying him like he was after the game. Most people just revert him back to his emo state. A very nice one-shot. :)

Aw, this story was so cute; I loved it. I really liked the way it was written and the non-ooc-ness. Great job!

It was short and sweet, I'd write more but staying awake at the wee nights is bad for creativity.

Write moar

Epic success. Instant fave. I completely adored it, so in character! You are a God of TWEWY. D