It's...
Painfully beautiful.
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I liked your description of the afterlife very much and the moral dilemma SH had to face. But my favorite moment was when SH watched the new couple and grumbled about the intelligence of Samwille:) Thanks for sharing!

I don't know why but you made me cry! This is too SAD!

Poor Holmes! So he did decide to let Watson move on without him.. Good for Watson but Bad for Holmes :(

This story is purely genius... please continue to write something like this again!

I'm crying now... this is so sad... *cries* I loved it though...

So.. I don't know even how to start. This fanfiction is perfect. I loved all single words of it. And, oh, how I cried.

I read it first in my cellphone. I was at work, and I cried like a little baby! I have to stop in the middle and go to the bathroom to take a breathe. Was really THAT touching. You wrote it really, really well. Then when I came home I finished it.

The whole development was amazing. I liked how you started "subtly" with Holmes' suicide, and how you doesn't make him do the cliche 'one bullet in the head'. I also liked very much the White Place. White reminds peace and calm, so you think it's a heaven or something. But then you painted a new picture for hell. A white hell, very creative. White never will be the same for me. xD

"Forever". I never had a bigger fright with one word. When he asked Lucy how long he would be there, I expected some "Until you learn what you have caused with your death", and then she would show him how Watson's life sucks without him. Instead, you almost made me scream of scare. I wonder, if I was scared, how Holmes' were?

I could really FEEL the sadness and despair of Holmes, impotent, can not do anything about Watson's suffering. His despair and devoted love was touching. I feel very sorry for Watson, too. That really was a story of one true love.

Sorry for any mistakes. I'm Brazilian, so..

(And wow, that must be the biggest review I ever sent xD)

The writing was amazing but it was so sad. Now I'm depressed :(

My first read on this pairing, I do love them together.

I'm sort of glad that you didn't go with the old 'happy ending for everyone' thing. It makes it more interesting.

You have a talent for writing, and I'm often impressed by those who can write well using present tense- probably because I'm crap at it, myself XD

Awesome job!

Omg...I love you...u r a genius! I love this story...I never cry but I came very close to it! I screamed no when holmes chose the wrong destiny...ahhhh! The one time it is important for him to b selfish and he isn't! I am also on fanfiction... Name the same as the one above...look me up! Thanks for the amazing story!

Jesus, that was heartbreaking. You used the wrong Holmes though, in the charector place. You picked MyCroft rather than Sherlock. Figured you should know.

This was absolutly...I don't know. So sad. So tragic. So perfect.

Omg you evil person, you made me cry! I liked your story a lot, good work!

You made me hurt in places I didnt know I had.

That was so sad... you broke my little heart :'(

I cried. Lots. But so very very well written, very emotive, and enjoyed reading it. :)

Oh God this was _so_ sad. I couldn't help crying when Holmes had to make the decision. Poor Holmes.

oh god, youre evil...

This is the first sotry Ive ever read with this pairing and I am crying here like a crazy...D

Nice start..D

When I forget the fact that it was excruciating it was absolutely gorgeous and genial 3