love love love it fantastic job.

Congratulations on winning the contest. I had an entry as well, but knew it wasn't in the running. I like how Edward says "May I?" My Edwards are all gentlemen (even my Roman tribune Edward, who is a little bit of a brute at first) and they always say please and thank you. Again, yay you! Woot!

Bella took a huge risk in telling her best friend Edward that she was in love with him. Bella didn't have the nerve to tell him face to face so she left the letter in his mailbox. The letter told Edward her feelings and to meet her at the fountain on campus at Harvard. Edward didn't arrive on time. Bella even stayed longer waiting for him to show to reject her. As Bella was leaving Edward called her name and caught up with her. Edward admits he is in love with Bella. The rain has them both soaked. Edward takes Bella to his apartment. They make love and declare their love for each other. Pretty gutsy move on Bella's part to tell Edward because the fear of rejection practically froze her. When he was late Bella thought Edward was completely rejecting her and she would never see him again. didn't happen Edward showed up and said "I love you." Delightful. I love a happy ending.

Really good!

Haha! I loved it! D Amazing work! what a great one-shot! hopefully i can read more of the contest writers! D

awesome :D

totally love your story and voted for you!

Very Different...mature... I like it though...

I believe this one gets a vote too :)

Take care

Brenda

Aww... Bella and Edward romance and lemons!

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It's a really good one-shot...

I enjoyed readin it...

It was written really well i think, very descriptive :P

LOL

Emily,x

Quite descriptive i have to say, but in a good way, its enough to get across what is needed but not to much as to make the reader stop reading. it was a good one-shot, but as for what every you want me to vote on, i'm confused, i really hate to say this, but i'm one of those people who you have to say practically every detail for me to understand, that and i think your one of the first people to ask this of me.

Halloween Witch

Love it! Voting!

holy cow Bella certainly had a Happy Valentines Day. well done,emotional and very lemony.;)

wow that was a really grate one shote i mean one of the best i have read it had every thing i love i a grate story and you did it so well in just one chappter. thank you so much for telling me about this story and i am so going to vote for it right after i finish this lol. good luck n i really hope u win. :)

Aw this is really good!