This is good. We are sorry to see Neal wounded but he is going to be okay and Peter is there for him. Thanks for writing.

Aww. Poor Neal. Good story.

good story!

nice

This was a great story for the episode of White Colar called Home Invasion.

You did a terrific job.

JeanneZ84

AH! Neal can't get shot! *gasp* But he's alive... Phew. I worry about that guy. That would've been a very scary twist in the episode. Good job. I think it fit in well.

Sparky

I can really believe this. For a second there in the show I really DID think Neal was going to get killed! So this is very believable.

I was also thinking about writing a story like this-but I like yours better! Good job! And Neal whumpage was awesome!

Good job!

-Rascal

Those ending remarks were perfect. That's essenentially what the argument was about. They trust each other with their lives but not on the small stuff.

Nice!