So there having sex?

OMG! This fic is amazing!

I loved so much reading this work; it was completely lovely, just like an episode of the anime, especially the dialogue at the end!

Just perfect! My favorite Spice and Wolf fic ever!

Thank you for sharing it! Thank you so much!

A lot of kisses for you, and I'll be waiting more fics like this one!

See ya!

i loved this story u did a great job and i look forard to reading more of your stories

This was a pretty nice read. I mean the characters felt right and hearing Horo's thoughts is always nice. Interesting to see her look at her past relationships and see the difference between those and what she has with Lawrence.

The end was definitely nice and really having Lawrence make a move isn't bad at all. Considering how short this relationship will be in terms of Horo's lifespan I think they should enjoy the time they have to the maximum.

Not a bad one shot,it was sweet and I liked it. I think you managed display Horo very accurately, but sentence structure can be improved in some places. Overall, very nicely done!

I just started watching this anime on Hulu, and I like the dynamic between Lawrence and Holo (as it's subbed/dubbed there). I think your story captures it VERY well. Good job. :)

Loved it! Excellent for a one shot.

I liked your story it felt like you actually captured their personalities. The only think I don't agree with is your rating,I would change it to a T. Keep writing I love reading new fic. about this couple. _