That was hysterical. Apparently when Sarah speaks the truth, she gives it both barrels. And I do have to agree Schwarz and Fedak don't know jack crap about women.

Well done.

And what pilot, was that?

Cool fan fiction, but if Sarah was going to go adorable psycho that would mean she'd go plow Chuck around 100 times and kill thousands of skanks.

Awwwe poor Shaw and Chuck! I was have expecting them to be each other's Valentines when they both got rejected by Sarah! ;)

And Sarah revealing her real name to them both?! I would have thought she'd need to kill them both after that! Stranger things have happened in FF!

You're a fantastic writer and witty comedian. There's no denying that. You're one of the best writers I've come across on FF.

But, I really don't like the negativity in this. I'm not happy with the way the romance/s in Chuck is/are being handled thus far. But this "story" is just a well crafted insult toward people you don't agree with. And that may change.

The directors and writers vary with each episode, but they do work together to create a plot direction. It's not just Schwartz and Fedak pulling the strings on Chuck. The producers, writers, and directors haven't changed. They clearly did something right on their show because it picqued your interest at some point- enough that you spend a good deal of time writing fanfiction for it.

Their story isn't done. Chuck Versus the Mask is just one of nineteen "chapters" in their third "book." I recommend you "retreat two steps back" from your high place, and return to your usual business of creating comedic gold in the Chuck fandom. Poking fun or mocking frustrating parts in "Chuck" is one thing, but blatantly calling Fedak and Schwartz fucktards is out of line. At least in my opinion.

Well, there is one thing this story got absolutely right: Sarah IS pretty much the perfect woman. And her tirade about how crappy things have gone for her with the men her life was pretty spot on, which is why I kept expecting Carina to pop up somewhere. Not that I don't understand why she wasn't there, after all, like you said, Sarah needed to figure out who she is, I was still kinda disappointed. Heh. Anyway, Shaw and Chuck acting like stupid jackasses was funny as hell and the way they kept trying to one-up the other and seemed completely incapable of understanding that Sarah just wanted to be with herself (oh I'm with Chuck and Shaw here, wish I could have stuck around for Sarah's date night).

And hey, dude, you ain't working on that pilot alone. Don't forget we already worked out how the casting situation is going to go. But yes, she is so way too good for Chuck. They don't exploit her nearly enough, and I mean that in a totally non-dirty way. Very amusing little love letter from Sarah to Sarah, the reason we all watch the show.

Very nice. Any chance of a turnabout is fair play sequel where Chuck spends a Valentines with himself and spurns the attentions of Sarah and Hannah?

Bwahah! Makes me want to say - Go, girl!

Thanks for this particular brand of 'Liam-fluff'!

Heh! Very nicely done.

Good job making Chuck and Shaw look like dolts.

I likey. :)

Hah! And, right on!

absolutely loved it. tho nothing out of the ordionary there, i love all ur fics :D

" or i'll go Adorable Psycho on his ass"

Loved it ! For once Sarah didn't have to suffer to awkward fic encounter w/ either shaw or chuck !

And Yvonne is really almost too good for CHUCK

ah nice one love the touch at the end