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The best I have read so far! I just really really hope that this fanfic is completed cause I've noticed that every good fanfic I read was either incomplete or something was missing in it.

Really excited about this story!

Please allow naruto To have kamui

Guurd (good)

really you made her a senju wtf thats just wrong

wow this is like an actual book oh my god

This is quite fascinating.

You suck. You can't even keep sasuke's personality consistent - one moment he has the personality of a grieving brother wanting revenge, the next morning he has one of a chad who wants to fuck guren. There's no fucking consistency, and until you fix that, kill yourself.

Can you stop fucking a good story up with meaningless subplots like saito?

you really like gagging on the akatsuki's cock don't you?

Amazing story! The premise was fantastic, but how you've been building along the way has been incredible! The way you developed the Senju and Uchiha powers is cooler than how Kishimoto did. And now with the Fate theme and the clockwork race for Madara and Saito and Tobi as characters to watch out for, I think I will realy, REALLY love this story. I will watch some of your videos. Keep the good work! :)

Well technically he doesn’t have to kill anyone to activate it... he just has to blame himself (canon Itachi, and canon obito, kakashi actually did it tho, but obito blames himself for her getting killed.)

Also, madara has awakened the rinnegan twice;

Once when he was alive, and once when he was reanimated.