Great plot!

lovely story

LOVE your story.3

(And if you noticed, when ever i find a good author, i start reading all their stories that interest me and review a lot. .)

"Do you mean to say that this foul disease could make me lose my connection with the Heart of the Cards? Yami gasped, errantly connecting his current 'illness' with Yugi's analogy."

-Sighs- I love Yami and his non-modern time phase! It's the best!

I really don't know how to express myself but the best thing i can say is that this is an amazing story. I love the idea soooooooooo much! I often wonder where people get their ideas from, and this was a gem. Good job!

Oh, God ... This is just ... Incredible!

I'm amazed, and overwhelmed by such a fantastic story! What a plot! And the angst and the emotions you've had me feeling all the way through - seriously, I've never got so into a story before, but I was nervous and jumpy and excited and terrified and teary-eyed at momentous points during this tale. I can't believe just how ... well, EPIC this has turned out to be.

Honestly, can't thank you enough for sharing. Defintely faving you! All of your work seems to be in a league of its own! I hope to see more from you, soon!

Blessed Be,

Mogwai x X x

Holy crap that was so awesome! Your work and the way you write Yugi's and Yami's relationship is so perfect. There's another author that I know who writes in a similar way to you. Her pen name is Bayleef and I highly suggest you search her profile for something of hers to read. There's one fic she has (in a series) that had me second-guessing myself trying to figure out mystery characters that I couldn't think anymore. Although what you write is amazing, I have never seen a fic where an author pulls so many plot twists and unexpected turns on the reader that it caught me completely by surprise (that, or I'm just stupid). Btw, Slent Sacrifice is super extremely sad but done so well.

Wow! Loved it! I'm glad that Memory Eater was destroyed...And I'm glad everything is back to normal...well, as normal as it gets for them, anyway ) I had a nagging question about Yami having a body...Is it like an actual human body, or is it like a wax doll or something (the idea which came from a manga called "Vampire Doll" that I read some time ago). I just find it weird that a body would appear out of nowhere should Yami need it...Yes, I need something logical, otherwise it'll plague me until I find out...But if you don't feel like explaining it, then that's fine too. I look forward to reading more of your stories!

Aw! Dude, that was awesome! U Rock on! I'm sad it's over, but it was really good! U

Gosh, from the attempts at getting his memory back to the Memory Eater...it was all so great! The kids protecting each other, Kuriboh being alive in the Puzzle (so cute! Love Kuriboh)! U Rock on!

Ah! That was wonderful! Definitely favoriting this story. Great job.

I love you. You know that right?
Lol. I loved this chapter.
THis story was the bomb,
You rock!
Ha ha. I never even predicted this outcome~!

Aw! I liked the ending of this chapter! Is this a new story? I don't recall seeing it when I first visited your profile, but then again, I try to avoid reading incomplete stories... Anyway, you're doing a fantastic job so far; I especially love the idea of Yami having his own body. Was the Memory Eater your idea? Another good addition/invention. And now I want a pillow that looks like Kuriboh!

Looking forward to reading more!

A true masterpiece! I can honestly say that's its one of the greatest stories I've red. keep up the great work!

AW! I love it! :)

WE'RE WITH YOU! BE SAFE AND RETURN SOON! X)