Dude, I cried and cheered and had to put this away at the awkward moments. I felt everything you wrote. Amazingly written. Thank you! Please write more fan fictions!

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I finished this fic such a long time ago and I drew this a while ago but I honestly loved it and everything was so great, I hope you write more. Sorry the proportions probably aren't that good and I can't draw Roxas's hair to save my life... Thank you for writing such a great story.

Ive read this story many times over the years since it was published, I just love it. Hope to have you bring our boys back together soon :)

That was such a great fanfiction! I hope you write more!

I have finished reding this fic and I must sy it is well worth the read. The characters are well developed and the writing style brings then to life. I must admit I stayed up til 6 reading this, its quite addicting. T any who wonder if not to rad this, you should. Like many others I was not disapointed.

Omg it's 3:33am i'm so tired but I read everything at once haha
It was a really good story :) Loved the developement of Roxas and Axel's relationship. I like the way you don't put lemon just to please the fans. It was really amazing. I wish there were many good writers like you are !

Take care!

Oh my God why have I never read this story before now? I've been reading it for the past three days straight almost and I'm so in love with it. For fuckin' serious. xD (Sorry, couldn't resist that.)

But for real, I'm like, wanting to kick myself for not reading this sooner. I seriously love this story so much, but I will say, the first... however many chapters it took for Roxas to legitimately give Axel a chance were hard to read without getting annoyed like he did. xD I remember feeling pissed off on his behalf. I can't stand annoying people, but being annoyed at Axel was... hard. xD Except for when he stepped on whatever thingie of Roxas' that he did. That made me mad, but at that point, I could totally understand where Roxas was coming from.

I will say though, I laughed out loud several times over the course of this story, especially with the things like, talking dirty to the food, the way Roxas' brain would veer /way/ off track, and Sora being so nosy. xD That... That was great. You have such a gift with writing, and I'm so glad you take advantage of it. I'm very grateful. I'm looking forward to the next story of yours to read. (: So, until the next one
Kuno

Ah they're so childish.

Roxas is such a funny fucker.

Fuck this is hilarious I fucking love it.

I cackled.

Ah I love how Roxas' mother acts.

This is gold.

Hold on a fucken minute. You never explained who that guy was.

Yahoo! Another great story. my only critique was sometimes there was too much of Roxas's thoughts between some of the dialogue. Other than that nice job. I'm finally getting back to my story (now that my computer is fixed...ish...) so I sped through the second half of this in two days. Hahaha.
I look forward to reading more of your stuff in the future. Good luck with your future projects!