Oh, wow, I didn't know that you wrote this! I remember reading this forever ago, back right before I left FFN. Small world. Anyway, I loved this story. Well, you can't really call it a story, since it was just an analysis (of sorts) of the characters. But that's what I like about it-it's a creative look into the characters, and it's very well written. Wonderful job!

Lovely job on capturing Graves so well, and with some fluffy Shilo moments to boot. Awesome, awesome job overall. My only regret is that there couldn't be more chapters to read, so...what do you think you'll be writing next, so that I'll know what to look out for?

Luvvles, Weasley

this was another great story. it gave new insight into the characters, i can't wait to read more of your stories. i think you may be my favorite author or at least inthe top five. great work

Hehheh, GR has a little surrogate sister...at least that's what my imagination told me just now. Claire is awesome, and so is Shilo's claustrophobia kicking in. Keep up the good work!

(ps-Sorry I couldn't review earlier, death in the family...D: )

You go, Mr. Chauffeur. This OC has my vote of confidence. *flashes a thumbs-up and reads on*

I love how you've brought depth to even the most shallow characters. Will there be more?

I'll be frank; Amber Sweet is usually not a character I like to read about. However, this was possibly my favorite so far in this fanfic! Wonderful character study; her realization towards the end was really well done. I enjoyed the way you described her addiction.

Keep up the good work~!

Wow, this story is great! I like the idea of explaining the characters through a series of quotes. Your writing is much, much better than a lot of the other stuff I see on this site, as well. I can't really say what my favorite part of this was-it was all wonderful. Please, update soon! :)

I was too lazy to log in this morning, but anyways...flawless chapter here, you've got Nathan down perfectly as always. Keep up the awesomesauce work. :D

Lovely job capturing Pavi in all his twisted glory, and double for Mag, too. I like how you put together Nancy and Niko like that, it's a shadow of what Mag hoped to see last, but never did.

Just two things-you put 'know' instead of 'no' and 'did she' when it probably should be 'did he'...hope that helps. :)

oh...oh, wow. This was... wow. I can't think of a word to describe this. Harrowing, touching, perhaps moving? Wait, I know it-beautiful. This was simply beautiful (and all the other words I said before,and hundreds of others I haven't got time to type). Amazing, fabulous, crazy awesome, touching piece of writing. I absolutely loved this!

I love the idea behind this and your execution. It's lovely! Please, write more. I'll be eagerly waiting.

So Pavi's first face was a guy's? Pavi must of realized later that it is much more threatening to have a girl's face on. It looks more spoky! Anyways, Bravissime Shovel! I like the idea for the stories. PLEASE CONTINUE!

Oh...oh my. This was...awesome. o-o; Poor Stan! I rather like the fellow... Wonderful writing, I'll definitely keep reading this!