aww, i'd have liked it better if she had shocked the hell out of him by following up on his teasing question about a kiss WITH a kiss. but it's still cute.

cute ;)

Nice fanfic...Totally believable.

loved it!

loved it!

Please write a new chapter soon! It was so good! I loved it!

Oh so nice sweet little one shot. I liked it)) And ur english is ok, so you may write smth more, smth longer about them. I just love this couple, can't help it))

I found this to be very sweet and I enjoyed reading.