Reviews for A Place to Belong
xaldreca chapter 59 . 8/22/2019
I kinda hope things actually get better than in canon, if you ever decide to pick up this story again.
Guest chapter 14 . 3/19/2019
he image - the image
Guest chapter 2 . 3/19/2019
eh ceremonies - the ceremonies
lrdchief chapter 59 . 9/20/2018
So, coming on a two year anniversary on your hataius, gonna post the next chapter after Christmas or...?
Pyromania101 chapter 1 . 8/17/2018
I do like this story, and I'm hoping you'll get back to it eventually. There's really not much else to say.
PointlessFigment chapter 7 . 8/26/2017
Hmmmmmmm.
W8W chapter 59 . 8/13/2017
Niezła historia. Obojętność Lucy względem wszystkich prócz Kouty szkodzi ich związkowi niestety dziewczyna tego nie rozumie. Na początku nie rozumiałem czemu Kauhlua jest umiarkowanie przyjacielska w stosunku do Lucy skoro ta jej nie cierpi i się z tym nie kryje, zrozumiałem dlaczego dopiero kiedy przeczytałem że prawie wszyscy reagują na pannę Shuzen. Niechęć Lucy jest skierowana do wampirzycy jako osoby, nie obchodzi jej nazwisko i ród więc jest rzadkością.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/9/2017
Well... from what ive seen of Kahlua so far im quite sure she is going to make this story really bad compared to what it could be.
Kouta is a pathetic little shitstain, Lucy who supposedly loves Kouta and wants him to be safe isnt willing to kill Kahlua while she is weak letting Kahlua run around to do whatever she please for forced drama. Its shit really, obvious forced drama is always bad writing.

so far, this story gets 2/10
PrasannaBhat chapter 1 . 4/29/2017
LOL.. u exactly write what i want to read... Funny, i wasn't interested in fanfictions before i found Elfen leid stories, and well i don't find anyone better then u at writing this story... :)
Guest chapter 59 . 4/19/2017
FES-TI-VUS!
the unsung antihero chapter 59 . 1/26/2017
*appears in a clockwise spiral of black smoke and blue flames*
OK I've got a few questions:
-Author: Gin... Is he going to be introduced as a solid part of the story? Or are you just going to do a cameo for the guy? Because while Gin is a pervert (not as bad as isse hydou, but bad) he's at least (semi) dependable, he's also one of my favorite male characters in the series so I am quite curious.
-Lucy: about how many times a day do you feel like throwing kahula out the window for reasons not related to kouta? Also be honest, you don't REALLY hate kahula, you just don't know how to admit that she's actually your best friend... Right?
-Kouta: you are way more forgiving than I ever could be, for that I applaud you. Your also probably one of the few people who can keep the horny (metaphorically unless she regrows her horns that is) yandere of your group under control (without resorting to physical force)... But that's not really a question is it?... I guess I'll just ask the "about how much longer do you think your sanity will last, or has it already been lost?" Question.
-Yuka: your probably the most "normal" person in this fic. I get that you love the guy and all, and I get that you don't think he's safe there, and I get that you were overcome with greif and your probably being held against your will by kahula... But seriously... Did it ever occur to you that heading to yokai could have been a bad idea? Or did kahula just tie you to the seat and bring you along for the ride as her snack once she saw you?
-Kahula: I can't really think of anything to ask you other than... Have you gotten any closer to making that fantasy become a reality? Or have your thoughts moved on to other things?
-Headmaster (if he's there): are you in any way related to a dimension hopping dead appostle by the name of "kicshur zelretch"? Because at times you act like you could be his younger brother.
Slimjim77 chapter 2 . 1/2/2017
...Shit got real.
Slimjim77 chapter 1 . 1/2/2017
OH DAMN! Liking it so far.
keithallen chapter 59 . 1/1/2017
*Groan* hilarious and silly.
BAD Yuka, giving goblins stomach aches!
Draco Illius Mortem chapter 59 . 12/29/2016
I quite enjoy this story.

Questions:

Sun: Is there a reason you can't speak and only use your notepad or just preference?

Lucy: If you still haven't completely fixed things with Kouta why don't you trap Yuka somewhere some night sneak into Kouta's room and make love to him like animals. He'll probably forgive you by the morning.
If not, just share the rest of your secrets if you have any of course. And Why haven't you realized your secrets hurt you more than protect you, Kouta forgave his family's murder, the other shit's pretty trivial

Yuka: Stop obsessing stalker.

Kahlua: Kouta's a true friend why don't you show a bit more of that true self eh?
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