SAD :/

Waw, I can't help but smile at the end of your story, which was very well-written until the end. I liked the depth in Sakura's words, and how she would always devote herself entirely to Sasuke, which is what's so adorable about her. But I may ask: has Sasuke asked Sakura out of mere courtesy, or does he like her...? The end confused me a bit, but it was still enjoyable.

TTTT I wanted to cry at this time, really it hurt me damn much. "Sasuke's eyes didn't move, but the perfect black wells reflected the passing cars and a disappointment deep as frost. "That's all I can have?"

The dejected-child tone." Gah, it hurt like shit. I don't know why but everytime that Sasuke is hurt in a fic or the manga/anime it hurts me too, but it hurts damn much. Like if I was the one suffering. Cause I can see the face, I can hear the voice; the tone used, I can feel it too. And I want to hold him in my arms but his not real, and yes I'm in love with a fictional character since I was eight. I've been in love with Uchiha Sasuke since 6 years ago. And I won't stop. Sigh. Well, I was saying, I suffer what I want to suffer. I want to suffer what he suffered and I can feel it, I don't know why but I sometimes cry thinking about it. But when I think about things that do happen I can't feel a thing. Well, I love your fic it was awesome. Sakura you are cruel. Sasuke you are good and sad. Love your fic you are awesome. UNtil now this is my my fave fic you have ever written.

This was interesting to read. The narrative was strangely detached, and yet...I still cared about the ending. I wish there was more of a definitive resolution—and where did they go from there?—but I can also understand why it is best left as is. Nicely done. :)

it's really well put together; i love it

that was so cute..great story!