Emotionally-constipated Uchihas… great story!

Best wishes,
Naruto Meowzers

Such a waste of lemon... maybe you've posted it somewhere else?

Awwww

What happend to the lemon? This is a great story though. ;)

WTF no lemon whhyyyyyyyyy ( but it was still really good though)

I seemed to have missed something that was in the lemon u took out. What was the reason that Itachi never said 'I love you' to naruto? Btw, I love Madara's attitude, and I agree that he is indeed really hot

ooo *searches for the lemon* oh where oh where could u be!?

Good job on this story. I could have soo imagined this as a multi-chapter story XD ah well, still once again really good job ).

Love it but wish I could have read the lemon.

No! Stupid, stupid REDBUTTON! I really wanted to see the lemon, without it, it detracts from the story. Either way, I liked the shot.

I think the ending needs work. Sex does not make everything right in a relationship. Especially when one of the people in it thinks that the other only wants them for their body. That encounter would only make that assumption worse. Itachi only told Naruto he loved him AFTER they had sex and then Naruto acts like it's a usual occurrence instead of the first time. Naruto should want to do more talking about the whole issue instead of acting like it never happened. An issue like that doesn't go away just because they had sex. It may push it to the back of their minds but it does nothing to resolve it.

hey. love the story but would like to read the lemon too.

do you have it? can you send it to me if you do?

My e-mail is

thank you !

I didn't like how it was too short, I would have loved some more drama and maybe Itachi trying to win Naruto back instead of them jumping into bed after 1 confrontation.

Other then that, it was good. :]

xoxo, Blooken

I really love this story.

Just spend like 2 hours looking for it!

Thank you!

Where did the lemon go? Great story, loved it