I really got to ask why do all people doing star wars fanfiction have to end it with a tragedy?

Naruto and Gaara have destinies that won’t be forgotten, and enemies that will chase them forever.

This is great to see since Gaara, and Naruto are great friends in the series but they will be tempting prizes for the Emperor.

Why would they want to become a jedi? Why would they give up their most powerful shinobi? Why must every story about this kind of stuff have naruto as the main character?
Also can you do another story except different? I'm getting really tired of seeing people copying each other on ideas. I would really like to see the anbu going on a mission in the clone wars. Or the akatsuki or something like that. (I don't mean to be rude ot anything) If I had offended you in any way, my apologies.
If you would consider my thoughts I would greatly appreciate it.
Thank you so much.
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GOD FUCKING DAMMIT! AAAAAGGGGG! HE WAS SUPPOSED TO BE A FREKIN HERO DAMMIT!
NOT A VILLIAN! WWWHHHYYY!

I have to say that I liked the story except for the ending. However, I do get it and it did end the story in a way. I only wonder why? Why not use the hiraishin jutsu to get to the falcon? Why end it like this? I do not like the ending because is just like every final seen where we have an end but we in another way we have a beginning. I would not have ended it that way but then again that is me. I do still think it was a good story and worth the read.

I have to say that I am loving how this story is going, all except the Sasuke parts. However, I always didn't like him so it's understandable. I also like your author note at the end of this chapter. Thanks for a good read and best wishes to you and what you write next.

Why do you have Gaara acting so occ. It kinda freaks me out. Other than that I’m enjoying the tale so far.

Well the story have the massive amounts of less knowl edge with shit a $ how

Ugh. I thought Gaara being involved would mean we'd get something other than a basic "heroes saving people" story. I hope they don't actually go to the temple if only because of the pure arrogance it takes to decide "I'm taking them with us back to the temple" when you've just been subdued by those very children.

most dissapointing story ive read in a long time

I wish you gave the Naruto cast a more mysterious introduction to Anakin and Ahsoka. Maybe even had them find their own way into the galaxy before introducing them. As it is this instant friendship/mentorship seems kind of generic to me.

Ok. a couple things. while the story was, for the most part enjoyable, I disagreed with having Naruto turn to the darkside. It's something he would never do. It was against his nature, even in your story. His turn to the dark side made no sense. It wasn't like Anakin's turn. Naruto's turn just seemed to come from nowhere. He had respect, he had love. He was even made a master, and used logic better than most his age. On top of that, he had Kurama's complete cooperation. He never would've made a decision to turn to the dark side without asking Kurama what he thought, and Kurama would've helped him make a better decision. Your story was good up until that point. After that, it made no sense. I continued reading simply because I finish what I start, but got no enjoyment out of the rest of the story, because it didn't flow with how you started it.

Why have you not continued this. It's awesome

man... your story is amazing, I love the way you write, but I've gotta say that the end of the story as I see it, it was short and anticlimatic. I mean. seriously?. all that inner fight and finding a reason to keep fighting just to end with only one phrase?. I know that writing a story isn't easy, but for all that you made him go through. the readers expect you would put a little more impact over his possible dead or a little more emotion of his or ahsoka's part. like when jiraiya died in the anime. I don't know man so many possibilitie.
I am going to be honest. I was hopping a heratbreaking end that would made me cry.
but regardless. it was very good story. I loved every chapter of it.
keep the way you're going. you're doing great.
I only have two questions. first. what about their child? you didn't mention if it was born or not, if was boy or girl. and second are you going to make a sequel?.
Greetings from Colombia.