Pls don't tell me you're adding Tayuya and Hinata next.

Oooooh Itachi

I'm surprised Sakura doesn't have the summons yet though. But I can see why I guess.

The feels qwq

As usual, very well done.

Uhh still cringing at every moment of Hinata.
I am sorry but I just dislike her a lot. Some reasons make sense and others are completely irrational. The only thing that makes tolerable is her being ooc ah ngl

But I'm super curious about the next events. Won't they be recognized on a ship like that despite uniforms? Hmmm

Meh I don't see how making strictly NaruSaku "cheapens everything that happened before". Unless it's something very quick and painless which it already isn't. I'd say it's the opposite effect they've both hurt and been hurt by each other but chose to be together despite that overcoming their past differences. A fully conscious choice of what they're getting into with commitment to do better.

I am still in awe of your writing

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I really like this!
And I'm hoping you won't bring Hinata into the pairings. Don't really care who else but for the love of all that is good not her

Please continue it. After sensoring the lemon parts. Also I can see that Itachi x Konan is starting to become a pairing. Naruto x Sakura x Hinata x Tayuya is an awesome pairing! I think Naruto should have one more girlfriend to become an even number of gf’s. Maybe Yugito when Naruto saves her?

Wait, I’m sorry. Naruto is doubting his reasons for distrusting and being distant towards Sakura? For what reason? It’s highly reasonable that he he’s distant towards her because she explicitly betrayed him at the beginning of this fic.

She used him and his feelings in her own ploy to get Sasuke back. Just doing that alone is grounds for feeling resentment to the offender. How could he trust her, especially given her record of emotionally taking advantage of Naruto? I mean, it’s not like she didn’t intend to. She fully bloody did.

I can see you’re trying to make her redemption to Naruto solid, for the plot at least. But let’s not forget, she’s no saint and she’s definitely no misunderstood tragic character. She knew what she was doing by hurting Naruto. And it’s well known she favored Sasuke and was willing to throw Naruto away. So of course, Naruto would be pissed and spiteful against her. She made her bed, now she has to sleep in it and all that, yeah?

The fact that so many people are making her seem the victim and Naruto the douche is ridiculous. Sure their both wrong. So portray them as both being wrong and her PROVING she’s loyal only to Naruto. Hey, a few words ain’t gonna change heartbreak and betrayal. It kinda seems like you’re favoring Sakura a wee bit too much. Naruto and many other characters have every right to despise her. I mean, she was willing to betray the Leaf and Naruto at one point!

Please update

This story could've had great potential as a Naruto X Konan story, but you had to go and fucking ruin it.

I liked the Naruto version of the Dirty Dozen, but found the Naru-Saku dragged down a good idea.

*face palm*
Seriously?

Was the whole Naruto and Konan thing absolutely necessary? Especially since this story seems deadset on hooking Naruto and Sakura up.

Man, I actually was really liking this so far. Oh well, the search continues. That's not to say your fic is bad, just not what I'm looking for.

Best of luck with this story.