Reviews for My Roomie Lulu |
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Chaos Nightbringer chapter 1 . 4/2/2018 Ooookay. Puts a gun on whoever knocks on his door in the dilapitated crack-house. Too intetesting not to continue. |
Guest chapter 20 . 7/5/2017 This is so good. How I wish to get to know their baby. XDD |
Dragonheart Of Ireland chapter 1 . 10/6/2016 Cool fic! |
Guest chapter 11 . 8/7/2015 I'm sorry but this story seems completely impossible. No matter how ditzy this Kallen is supposed to be, I can't see a large majority of this happening. Lelouch acts like a cereal killer at points and Kallen acts completely fine not ten minutes later. He picks her up, throws her over his shoulder, and starts to walk out of the door. This situation should be very bad, especially when she gets out of his grasp and tries to run. When he begins to chase her, she should be panicking, not laughing like she hadn't almost been kidnapped less than five minutes prior. I just can't believe these characters. I'm sorry but I personally think that you need to look back at your writing and really think about how they should really react to the situations they are in. Keep trying and I'm sure you'll get it eventually. Good luck! |
LolaTheSa chapter 18 . 10/27/2014 Bull fucking shit. |
Inuyasha-loves-Hanyou-Kagome chapter 20 . 10/19/2014 Hey I hate to say this but come on. You call this complete? Sorry if I'm ranting but it reads to me like this story arc is yet to be complete. OK that's it I'll stop before I say something I don't want to. |
nicfoto5 chapter 20 . 6/27/2014 I think this chapter is really good and I hope you'll write a little chapter to tell us Kallens answer and show us Naotos reaction |
Jedias Gloshma chapter 5 . 9/3/2013 I like it. I like it a lot. |
Nicole chapter 9 . 2/15/2013 why does lelouch sound like a bad person. he is nice, smart and hot! |
vanessa chapter 7 . 2/15/2013 the only thing she left behind is the vomit. ewwwwwwww thats grosss |
FalconRukichi chapter 20 . 3/26/2012 nice story~ suzaku as a gang leader and because of misunderstood that happen long time ago had destroy their relationfriendship. good job for the this story! |
Missdarkdestiny chapter 20 . 6/21/2011 OH M GEE! So friggin awesome dude Don't think of me as a perv but awesome I actually understand ur writing And I do think that suzaku is hwat and so is lelouch I 3 suzaku!...&...lelouch!... |
fate chapter 12 . 5/29/2011 God my head hurts,6:35am yet agian I find my self reading a story I cant take my eye's off. damn!, kids these day's and there engaging write's. |
ilimisichan chapter 7 . 4/1/2011 a song that i want to dedicate in this chapter is lying is the most fun girl can have without takibng her clothes off by panic at the disco oh yeah... _ |
TenchiSaWaDa chapter 20 . 3/3/2011 One of the more gritty and better romances i have read. |