Aww

wish it was longer, so cute!

Aaww

Aww cute

i absolutely love this story... i have read the whole thing but i wanted to review the first chappter. also that is cool how u live a twlight

Good good not bad

I love these so much! Please continue them. They are cute and fluffy, and I'm addicted to them. I can't wait to read more :)
Even if it's real fluff. Maybe a beach trip? Or a holiday away somewhere? I love it.

Oh, and in this chapter, you kept calling Lizzy, Libby instead. It got a bit confusing at first, so maybe you should go and change that :)

Great job though! PLease update soon :)

I LOVE your writing style! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

I liked Carlie's point of view, I was just wondering though if Lizzie wasn't sleeping with Edward and Bella and funny business was going on what would he do? They already have a child they are married, does he have room to say anything? lol Can't wait to read more!

me likey the story!

I really Love This Story! Update Soon!

I love it

I can't believe so little people review your story. It's quite good :)

I just have one little suggestion- because your fanfic is more like a random one-shot based style, you should consider scenes or scenarios, when writing, that won't leave the readers hanging.

For example, in this chapter, leaving us hanging with something like "Emmett just called" is quite weird (unless you're planning to continue this in the next chapter or something.) - just a suggestion :D

Hope you get more reviews! You deserve it. :D

won't let me make another review for chapter 4. I just wanted to give my opinion on which scenario you should use. Since I'm definitely not a fan of Mike's, I would prefer you use the Charlie POV of Edward and Bella's relationship one.

I had to be a little sneeky to post this so hopefully you'll take my suggestion into consideration. Thanks

defiantly mike needs a good beating lol UD SOON