Linda, thanks for a great romantic comedy. The banter brought to mind the old Tracy/Hepburn movies. The story was laugh out loud funny in parts. You are a great writer. The story was a whole new take on these well loved characters. Some of the chapters could have used some editing. Certain conversations between extraneous characters went on too long and weren’t necessary to the story. However, the Chlois repartee was fantastic and I thoroughly enjoyed the Justice League band of brothers. Great work! Thanks for a truly enjoyable weekend.

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This story was such a wonderful surprise. Great sex and a fun story. What more do you need?

Only suggestion I could make wouls be to cut chapter length in half.

LOVED THIS ONE SO CUTE at the end.

their sex/love scene at the start of the chapter is perfect... you did it just perfectly for them...

ok, your clois story is really interesting... and your chapters are very long... it's not a bad thing, just unusual... you're a very good writer and the set and the time of their lives you pictured very different... in a good way...I love this specific chapter first for the stuff about Lana (I love you for that, really) and second for the way Clark is falling for her...If I can make a little criticism... I couldn't belive Clark had that deep and strong physical desire for her the first time he bomped into her and in his past 15 years any kind of sensual thought about her...this thing is bothering me...anyway I like the whole dynamic.

Loved every word I read! :)

Wonderful story!

I didn't know that you could feel it in your molars! Anyway thanks so much Linda for the romance. I enjoyed it. I was surprised how long this 1st chapter was and that u have 19 more. Ill make an effort to read it. I'm assuming that they get into other sexual variations. Ur Lois dialogue sounds like her but its shocking how bottom line she is. Also I wasn't sure if she had the power to read minds or if it's just her intuition. Great job! Thanks again

*sIGH* That's the stuff! The length of your chapters almost makes the wait worthwhile: both waiting for them to come out and finishing the read. Almost... :D

Enjoyed the chapter a lot. You're virtually peerless in concocting enthralling mundane encounters among your characters. It always makes your chapters riveting, imo. It was particularly fun to read the return of the San Antonio trio. ;) Carol and Anne are always a delight.

One other thing I'd like to comment on is your use of time skips. I think it is quite an effective method to continue to sustain interest in your story as it skids on an anti-climactic cruise to an end. Most authors would conclude their stories after the major denouement , but not you. Thank you for giving us the opportunity to partake in the aftermath of their marriage, etc. The only downside to the time skips is how interesting sub plots or convos are sometimes cut short when they get more interesting.

-P. C. Gotenks

loved it. took me over a week to finish the last chapter but I'm so glad I finally finished. this is definitely going with my favorite stories!

That was a perfect ending to an awesome story!

FANTASTIC! *stands up and applaude* From beginning to end, this story was a true delight. Your Clark was absolutely entertaining, funny, and a major horndog, but that's what I enjoyed most. He really knows how to brighten up a girls day. Haha.

And while I agree with Clark when it comes to Lois' visions, I love that she told him about their girls! He's so adorable with Little Gracie so why not make more babies? Another scene I enjoyed was seeing Clark as a dotting father by showing off his daughter's pictures to the JLA. Just too sweet for words.

Now am I surprised to see Clois' marriage lasting 20 plus years? Nope! It's like Clark said, it takes a lot of hard work and commitment to make a marriage work and I just love how much he adores Lois. I don't know anything about farming in Kansas, but as a mother of two, you did a wonderful job with Lois' pregnancy. I give her major props for being so calm during the early stages of her contraction cause by then, I would've been screaming for the epidural! Lol. It's like having your montly cramps times 100! If only we could all have it easy like Chloe. *sighs*

Anyways, I appreciate you taking time to share this amazing story with us. I know it may take some time, but I hope your muse will inspire you to write another one very soon. Take care, Linda! *hugs* :)

Loved it so much. Great job

Linda,

From the beginning to the end it was a great journey watching as the two found not only each other but themselves. Your stories are amazing and I am definitely re-reading this story from the beginning again. Its just that good!

-Larry aka Gladius Grim