Sometimes I wonder how the storyline would progress if Mai got pregnant from the first sexual encounter.

MAKE NARU AND MAI FALL IN LOVE AND GET MARRIED AND NEVER BREAK UP AND HAVE KIDS AND LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER AND MAKE SURE THEY DO NOT FIGHT OR CHEAT ON EACH OTHER THEY ONLY LOVE EACH OTHER

I keep coming back to this story and always re-read it after a while. I just love the plot. Well, of course the 'rape' concept is something I don't find fascinating at all. But I just love seeing this part of MaiNaru's. The part where they can be extremely intimate and vulnerable to each other. I think my heart is beating eratically everytime I read chapter 3. I love how you wrote the bed scenes and how detailed it is. Both of them are so in character and I somehow picture Naru like this on his 'first time'. I hope you write a sequel where they would do it in the 'office'. Gahahaha. Or maybe where Mai's pill won't work and she gets pregnant or at least where Naru realizes he likes Mai romantically. Huehue. I'm such a hopeless romantic when it comes to this , really love your work!

i just find this story and i really love it .
it already 5 years since the end of story but i really hope you will make the sequel like the other reviews that mai's pill didn't work or naru got jealous and naru admit to himself that he love mai before that accident.
after all that a very good story

Love the story

Thank you for making such an interesting story on naru and mai . I really loved it. I too agree with you that "Love at the first 'doing' didn't suit naru " . In other words you are amazing. I always wanted a deep relation between naru and mai - they are cute . I also have a request - please make a sequel to this. LOVE YOU.

Well.. that is one huge hug of lemonade you just give away...

You used "Sakura" at one point...

me encanto aunque esperaba que mai y naru terminaran juntos pero bueno tampoco esta mal eso dos si que son energéticos y mas naru :3

I liked this story besides what happened to poor little Mai, no one deserves to go on this situation, but the out come was good.

Actually, I think you should write a sequel in that the pill Mai took didn't work and then Mai gets pregnant and freak out thinking about it because she is nervous about Naru's reaction. They had to make a story to the others, because they shouldn't know what happened in the begining. Masako would be really hateful with Mai because she would be extremely jealous and Naru would be kind and considerate to her because it was his fault what happened.

I think it would be an awesome story, you are an amazing writer, I'm sure I would love to read the sequel.

So please think about it, and make a sequel!

omg wtf just happend any wayyy hope shes prego

i loved the story but during the part after she wakes up to naru fondaling he you call her sakura insted of mai

why sniff would you do that its so wrong and vhile and naru and i would never do that he and i are takeing our dateing slowly but when i make him marry me it will be at least a year or o befor that happans

I loved it! I cried at first and died laughing at theend!

Why Naru why! O.o