really enjoyed this, and I'm looking forward to more of your 01 and 02...although I would love to see it developing into slash, I'll read it as a bromance anyway bc I loved the storytelling

Got to say your action scenes are epic. I feel like I was wacthing a movie. I can't wait to read more of your work. Great job!

I don't remember how I found this story but I'm just glad I did!

I guess I'll just list all the things I loved! Loved the dialogue and character interaction. You had quite a few humorous lines in ther.! Duo was a riot and Heero's 'it's a gundam' line had me on the floor! Loved all the action. You write really good actions scenes! You brought a depth to Heero's character that I hadn't read in such a long time. And it was brilliant because his character was mostly revealed from Duo's perspective. There are a few more things but I think I've said enough. All in all I enjoyed your fic tremendously and I thank you for sharing it with us!

Also, I would so love to read about an older Ahli. And maybe finding out what Howard knows about the NF...Haha! But I am so glad you left it at a place with some closure and just a few mysteries for us to ponder on our own!

Holy cow... that was intense! And Heero corrupted little Ahli! :D Wonderful, wonderful job on this. Thank you!

Hi there! I sent an e-mail to Tokyopop suggesting that they make a fan magazine for fanart and fanfics. I figure that if enough people say that they want it and submit good fanart and fanfics they might actually make the magazine. Think you could e-mail them too?

Well, I just reread the story (would have reviewed the epilogue again but you can only review once per chapter) and I loved it even more the second time. The 'bromance' was done perfectly and your portrayal of Heero showed excellent character development while still being true to the original persona. Needless to say, everyone else was also perfectly portrayed and for that I tip my hat to you... or I would if I had a hat (don't own one).

Loved the ending too, and I hope to see a sequel (but no pressure).

... Hehehe. "It's a gundam." That still cracks me up. I also like the "gundams are like lobsters, you eat the insides."

Later

That story was amazing. You perfectly portrayed the characters. Their emotions, thoughts, motivations... Everything. The only little problem I had was Heero not being physically stronger then that "gundam" guy. It just seems like he would be. On the other hand, I REALLY like the way you described Heero as a little beyond human. Like how he walked to them from WITHIN the blast zone. Or how his bones and skin weren't 'human' or whatever. That was great.

Hahaha. "Its a gundam!" I was cracking up at that. hehe.

Wow, I just looked up and realized I unknowingly lost hours completely engrossed into this story! Wonderful script that didn't take over the story, the actions scenes were very nicely detailed (it wasn't hard to play it out like a movie in my head), and the characters and their interactions were engaging without being overdone or riddled with dreadful OOC. There are few fictions that I enjoy where the author introduces an original character, but Ahli was added seamlessly into the GW Universe without becoming far-fetched. Lol, It's all subjective, really.

P.S. Favorite part: When Heero perfectly aimed the rocket launcher paving the blockade, to Duo's surprise.

Wow, just finished the entire story. Awesome! Great characterization and the action was so intense! My fav was the chase with Duo's batmobile! Can't go wrong... Thanks for sharing!

I'm SO looking forward to a squeal! Please continue the story! I'll be looking for it!

there's gonna be a sequel? seriously? that would be awesome! i really really enjoyed reading this fic. :) thank you!

yay, duo saved the day. i just hope his ear can be saved as well. x.x

omg. . what the hell is happening now?

oh god, the fic is almost over. -_- i don't want it to end so soon.

your heero has a really cool humor. and i like the waking up routine you developed between heero and duo. :D