I always love a Bella and Edward HEA, but it feels wrong in this story, so far. I did not feel any of their chemistry as with Jasper. It is strange and hope I can root for their ever after.

"I don't know how long we stayed like that, but by the time I pulled away, I was fighting for air, and my body was tensing and relaxing, so far beyond my control I could barely even think."

Who are they fooling. They have loads of passion. Why can they not be more than friends?

Edward seems more like a side character than a romantic interest.

Where's my Esme? *Cries*

Where the fuck Is my sweet Esme? Bring her the fuck back! I need her!

I'm sorry but, WHO THE FUCK IS MAMERE?

Hmm, I was very nervous when I heard the name James. But how bad can he be if he is Angela's bro. However it was very smart of Bella to alert Emmett to where she was going and with whom.

This was a really interesting and thrilling turn of events, especially the last 5 chapters as those are usually full of fluff;)

Thanks for sharing their story

Someone said I should read this and I was not disappointed at all! It was fantastic! I loved the twin thing and the not perfect Carlise. It was all awesome and I couldn't put it down

i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i am happy that Bella & Edward are together & i am happy that Rose & Em are together & i am happy that Ali & Jazz are together

omg amazing no words. thank You!

You are such a liar. I know this is old but this isn't just Edward and Bella because at least half of the story is Bella and Jasper. I wish I was around when this was a wip. Nothing like fabricating something so people would read.

You made this Bella pathetic as fuck. You change her when she gets into this stupid ass situation where she thinks connecting with her Bitch sister means drinking until blackouts everyday. Pathetic. This Bella seemed strong but not so much anymore. One step away from being a prostitute.

Jesus, 16 chapters in, and Edward is no more than an ancillary character! I needs mah Edward lovin'!

Wow, I was tearing up thinking that she was dreaming about Edward! Great conclusion!

Wow, I'm sure glad I'm reading this as a completed story and don't have to wait for updates!