really good

Eh? *flushes* Estonia jealous? *shrugs* XD

*growls and hits you* You haven't updated in forever! And I feel like rereading the rp right now. ... at 1:13 am... I should probably go to sleep... ah well.. *pouts* Man, it's been like two months sense you last updated, two damn months! *really pouting now*

Aw! Yay! That was cute. They do make a cute couple too...XD

Oh man...that was awesome! :D

yay you updated i just got a chance now to read it since i was busy worringabout the convention i went to last week. T_T Toris misses his fellow aph people. *hugs e-sama* yay i have a vanya *gives giant ass sun flower* good job guys

*giggles* Oh, I remember this chapter now, I can't wait intill the next chapter gets posted though... It'll be good. Squeals. Oh and the translations at the end made me laugh, ah so many!

And you always seem to publish this when your sick, XD. So that's our excuse if people don't like it, " She was throwing up when she was typing this out, be nice!"

Ah, I hope people don't hate me to much for my OCCness, nah, I can't help it! * cowers behind a bush* And yes, I hate Russia X China! *makes yucky face*

Feel better! * huggles you*

i wish my Vanyas supported the couple a bit who is my main rp russia loves ivan x al htes russia with yao both find russia x canda cute. this fic was really amuseing add more soon please

so cute i couldnt understand most of what russia said but thats ok it was stull really~CUTE!

It was really hard to read, and some of the things I couldn't understand, but I liked it anyway :D

its a great story, but it's REALLY hard to read with how russia speaks

Interesting start...

I really need to tell you that this story is highly inaccessible for some readers, even with a guide at the top. It's much easier to have the characters speak normally, to be honest, but throw in a reference to an accent somewhere in the description, you know?

For example:

'"Come here, Liet..." Russia said through the fog of a thick accent, his voice an almost lustful purr, palatably rolling the 'L' sound, beckoning the brunette over with a suggesting backwards sway of his index finger.'

It's much easier to read, you know? :) But then again it's your story, it's up to you! :D

I'm putting this on Story Alert because I'm pretty interested in what could be in chapter 2, plus I love this pairing, as sad as it sounds. xD b

Yay, i'm learning Russian and appeasing my hetalia kink. I have no idea what you're going to do for the next chapter. This first one seems like a stand alone, well could be. But i'm sure whatever you decide to do will be awesome. I found Ivans speech a little hard to follow but meh, it makes him sound that much more adorable.

I liked the story, but not the accent. Russia was kind of obsessed with Russification, so there is no way he wouldn't make Lithuania speak Russian with him, thus no accent.

First review...I think... bwha!

I like the way you formated it, but I think reading the accent might be hard for a lot of the readers, you've trained me well so I get it, but eh, we'll see what they think of it, da? Haha, normally I don't like it when characters suddenly like getting raped, but this is Liet/Russia and they already have a history, so it works. XD.

Ha-ha, thanks so much for posting this up here now I can read the roleplay when ever i feel like it. *huggles you*

Oh and ... *stern mothering face* stop being sick! Or I'm going to have to move into your house to nurse you back to health. *glareglare*