Update soon please

Ahio! Konoha è nei guai!

So when is the next chapter coming the story is great

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very interesting story I had to reread it again I am not sure who Naruto's pairing was to be but I was hoping for a strong Kunoichi such as Tayuya,Temari or Samui or if you went harem all 3 I believe Kushina would approve of all 3 I hope you come back update and complete this

It's a great story and please continue this story !

shame this is dead

Oh goodie, more "seal stupidity". What part of "sealing is a LOST art" doesn't seem to click with authors? I swear most stories can't get through a SINGLE chapter without SOMEBODY pulling some "sealing bullshit" out of their behinds. Also trying to use ANY sealing garbage against UZU is just really, REALLY stupid.

10 to one? I HIGHLY doubt that one, not only that but considering MOST of them are just civilians that are CALLED ninja... I still think uzu would win! Most of konoha couldn't fight it's way out of a wet paper bag! Add in the fact that suna would betray them at the drop of a hat! More or less, konoha HAS NO ALLIES, only enemies! And their academy, their "new generation" of ninja are PRETTY TERRIBLE at their jobs.. AND ARE WEAK! It's NOT a good combo.

The whole thing with fu doesn't really work, I mean think about it, if jinchuriki could be controlled by simple seals, then they WOULDN'T BE CONSIDERED STRONG ENOUGH TO BE WEAPONS, but since they ARE then it only makes sense that SEALS DON'T WORK! Again, like with naruto, fanfiction creates a "chicken and the egg" problem.. To create a W.M.D. to use in war, they have to become badasses, but if they become badasses then they can't be controlled by the villages! If they CAN be controlled, then they aren't strong enough to be weapons...It's a self-looping problem! To make good "weapons" all these jinchuriki need to become so bloody powerful that not even THEIR OWN villages could put them down, then the villages have to pray to god they stay loyal enough to the village to not obliterate it. (your not going to do that with jutsu, or seals or ANYTHING of the sort) That's something naruto (and apparently Fuu) have LACKING.

From bad ass, to constantly sleeping, or CRYING child... WHAT A WASTE. This is KINDA why his parents NEED to die, he's USELESS as this MESS. The world doesn't NEED another of 7 BILLION children... It needs someTHING else... It doesn't NEED another WHINY CHILD, it needs a symbol FORGED IN FIRE, a BAD ASS... A DEMON LORD with the heart of a human... This garbage incarnation might as well shoot himself in the head, they both accomplish NOTHING.

Actually your "logic" for konoha is pretty much stupid... Their "numbers" are in the TOILET thanks to the kyuubi attack (thus WHY everyone hates naruto) it's the reason the academy is so DUMB ED DOWN, They don't HAVE any competent shinobi LEFT! They are trying to "pump their numbers" with MEAT SHIELDS. Konoha is (and is in canon) a PAPER TIGER, it LOOKS intimidating but only it's SHADOW... It itself IS EASILY TORE APART (pein did it in ONE ATTACK, so did MENMA... It's EASILY DESTROYED)

"who called this meeting?".. Um KUSHINA called the meeting, remember? Right after naruto was found.. DUH... Like three or four paragraphs before you questioned it! I realize DAYS have past, but it's a bit disorienting when it's LITERALLY SECONDS to the reader. A LOT of authors have that problem, it takes DAYS, WEEKS, MONTHS to write, it only takes minutes for viewers to read... You guys/gals need to REALLY read over what you've already written. Because for us to take it APART? It's MINUTES not however long it took you to write it. So "second line, first chapter, third person"... We expect you to KNOW. It IS YOUR CREATION AFTER ALL.

Naruto IS going to be joining the party EVENTUALLY right? Every single time ANYTHING happens in this story, he's off NAPPING SOMEWHERE! He's WORSE then shikamaru

At some point the whole "LOSS IN HER EYES". "and the steely look had a twist of LOSS" becomes not a hidden thing, JUST STUPID! Drop it already! Know three things on any naruto fic.. 1. EVERYONE ALREADY KNOWS EVERYTHING.
2, There really aren't secrets that can be held in the leaf, (their enemies learn them faster then their "allies")\
3. Naruto is getting blamed essentially for what is an UCHIHA problem. The hyuuga elders don't matter and hiashi TELLS them as much, the civilian council doesn't even EXIST... danzo is fired... And the third is more or less a COMPLETE IMBECILE. There is a lot ff need to work on.