good story so far! keep going!

Are you going to write any more? I love this story.

I'm sorry about Chaos. ( I know how hard it is to lose a pet, so my heart really goes out to you.

This chapter was craaaazy! So much insight into Cloudo! I don't think I expected any of this from him! lol. Here I was, thinking Zack had swooped in and taken his first kiss and was about to lead him down the unfamiliar road of romance, and it turns out he's been fooling around with Reno all along! And then at the end, he pretty much makes up his mind to sleep with Zack after they've been dating for like, a day and a half. XD You're supposed to make him work for it Cloud! You're sooooo not as innocent as I thought you were!

I feel a little bad for Reno though. He's going to be all alone now. ( I hope Zack doesn't get mad if he finds out about their "relationship" (which I hopes stays in the past, now that they're dating. No cheating, Chocobo!)

Zack really surprised me this chapter too. Cloud feels bad, but I think I'd react similarly if a guy did that to me! I understand Cloud's irresistibly cute and all, but you gotta control your hormones there, tiger! No more surprise pouncing! lol.

I'm very curious to see what's going to happen between these two! (And to see how Genesis reacts to all the GAY!)

(PS: B'aaaawwwww, Nanaki. 3)

Awww,they're together?How utterly cutejust what i was waiting for!THat Reno and Cloud part came as a total surprise,really good work with that!And that part where he thinks about how he's never been serious with anybody while sober really is something else,i guess we'll jsut have to wait to see hwo he deals with his emotions!Oh my,make-up time with Zack?hehheeh!

well that was a pretty good chapter cloud and reno were ok but i cant wait for zack and cloud please update soon

I totally didn't catch anything racist about how Barret was described. I wonder, does this mean I'm racist? lol

! NEXT CHAPTER IN CLOUD'S POV! JAEOIWEKJNSDAUHWEJFSAD I'M SO EXCITEEEEED! *fangasmsplosion*

Did Zack just buy Aerith Holy? XD lol. If so, that's one awesome gift! (the ribbon made me g'aww)

I'm still creeped out by Cloud's cat obsession, but looking at it the way Aerith put it, it's kind of sweet (though, when she said he couldn't leave 'anything' alone, I immediately thought of him adopting Denzel, lol). I wish he'd find a puppy! (Does finding Zack count?)

I can't wait until the next chapter!

Oh ya!Cloudy's pov!I can't wait for that one!But oh,this chapter was nicely written too,really good work with the gift idea!Hmmm...Zack's ex?He sounds meaaaan,You're putting more of him!That would be something now!

i'm totally loving the long weekend... oh! and the story 2 :] hopefully we here more on zack's ex soon?

hehehe that was a rather interesting dream zack had and i cant wait for the next chapter i like the idea of reading clouds point of view please update soon

keep it up! (:

Oh wow!That was awesome!loved that kiss scene,it was too perfect!Really nicely written again,all that memory recalling with Sepiroth and Genesis..wow!Oh man,modelling Sephiroth is too hot!

Oh wow!Genesis finally remembers,loved te part where they get into a fight,it's so like their childhood!Oh poor Zack,i hope Cloud remembers soon,or at least something happens with them!Pretty nicely written,all of Zack's emotions and all!Oh Gennie's a meanie!

OOHH!the way everyone seems to be coming along the story is quite unique!Oh Cissnei's dead?Poor Zack!

Oh no!No one really remembers him,hmm...i did quite like the way things went,Genesis looking at Zack's tiny car sure was like him!Oh but Aerith seems to be somewhat annoying,i'm surprised Zack can stand all that approaching she does to him!

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Can I just say.. You totally made my day better..

Like..

You did..

I just started reading this fan fiction yesterday and already I just CANNOTGETENOUGH.

It's so.. Beautiful!

I love how original the plot is! Zack goes away for more than just a few years, comes back and realizes everyone just forgot about him! And not for some silly reason like 'oh there was some supernatural gas that floated through the city', just..

Well actually I'm a tad slow so I don't quite UNDERSTAND how they all managed to forget, but I will one day because there's a chance that you haven't even revealed why yet anyhow..

. . .

Or I'm just slow.

But..

Honestly I adore it. And you didn't just SHOVE Zack and Cloud together, it was a slow beautiful process that's still developing that I just LOVE to see, even if I do get a bit impatient.

I have to say I slapped the air a bit when I got to the end of chapter four and realized there was no more beyond this

xD

I mean I know there WILL be, given that the story isn't over yet, but still..

It's just so gooood.. Man, I wish there was more right about now..

But Zack has some ODD taste in ice cream.. Can't say I like Cloud's either, but I'd rather eat straight up vanilla than..chocolate mint...

Ugh.

But why am I commenting on Zack's ice cream preference?

Because I'm weird like that, that's why.

This whole tendency to over analyze things..

ANYWHO

Um..

That is ABOUT it..

I adored everything placed in this fan fiction and I WILL favorite/subscribe..

Because I have a feeling that I'll beat myself up for it if I don't.

And honestly, you should have more reviews than thirteen.. Truthfully you should.

INANYCASE,

I'm just going to submit this now.

Can't wait until you get another chapter up!

I'll be awaiting eagerly..from the inside of your vehicle.. Clean the carpets, they're filthy.