I really really loved this. I feel you managed to cram a lot of implications in such a short story. And now I really want to see Peter's side of these two days. This was great! Thanks for writing it!

oh that was sweet :)

good story! glad neal didn't grab the chance to run...

Nice story

I absolutely love this story! I think i have read it every day since i first saw it. I just love it. Thank you for a really good story. it's just amazing.

AWWWWWW. So cute!:D

Nice job - I liked this a lot. It leaves me wanting to read more. :)

Absolutely LOVED this story. Thank you so much for writing and posting this wonderful one-shot :D

This is going on the favs!

Wow, 15 reviews hardly seems to be enough for a story this great, so I'm going to add another. :) Great writting, keep up the good work.

Loved the twist with the kidnapping. Its kind of infuriating not to know more about Neal's past but it does make for excellent fan fiction possibilities.

Lovely story, especially the case, great detail. But my favorite was the Neal&Peter-ness, very nice to read. **Favorite button** _ ~Nayah

I loved the understated way you showed their concern for each other. Very authentic voices. Nicely done!

Liked the story. Think your writing is concise and crisp. Keep up the great work. Will be looking for more from you.

Thanks

Great story! The characters were incredibly believable and the plot was very much in-line with what Peter and Neil would get caught up in.

Very well written. I liked this alot. The idea that Neal had a mentor is very plausible. I like the character very much. I'd love to see what else you have in store for Neal.