Reviews for Proof by Contradiction
Annie815 chapter 1 . 10/1/2016
Really like your stories; but where is your other account? What's the name of it?
Stelladoro chapter 15 . 8/28/2012
Love this, hope you're still writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Any chance you could repost Missing You? It was one of the first fics I read, and I just loved it so much.
Amelie123 chapter 15 . 7/13/2012
I tried several times to get into GwaDT, and never could. But this story is fantastic. Really intriguing plot! I'd love to see how this ends!
gabbyxoxrose chapter 15 . 4/2/2011
you're an amazing writer. honestly i have no idea where this story is going and im hoping you update soon so that i wont forget the important clues in the story once your next chapter shows up. so...jasper is a vampire? and edward is claimed to be a soon to be vampire or under their protection? annnd bella is claimed with the werewolves? and edward is alice's neice? or is edward just a loon and having these crazy dreams that mean something else? obviously carlisle and aro arent vampires. or are they? I AM SO CONFUSED BUT I LOVE IT! update soon please!
fatpotatoe chapter 15 . 12/17/2010
I really miss your chapters. Will you update soon, please ?
NZTwilighter chapter 5 . 10/21/2010
I'm confused... Edward is a Masen, right? Or has he assumed an alias for some reason we've yet to find out?
NZTwilighter chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
This is SO good! I'm intrigued, suddenly a bit cold, and wondering if I should wait till the morning to read the rest?

I love the parallel you've drawn with your Jasper/Alice and SM's B/E situation in Twilight and NM. And I will be even more excited if I find this fic has nothing to do with vamps!
fatpotatoe chapter 6 . 10/13/2010
I love this story. I read your previous fiction Prey and that was awesome too. How did you manage only to get a few hundred reviews? I love this story and I love you, thank you. Please continue to write.
YellowGlue chapter 15 . 9/13/2010
okay doodlebug, i saved this for as long as i could bear to - because i KNEW when i read it i'd want more right away.

SO YOU BETTER BE HARD AT WORK ON CHAPTER 16 - WHEREIN SARAH GETS HER FIX!

;)

the dream here was so beautifully done, i loved how surreal it was with the flames and the crackling the glowing and it was all very dali-esque and very aesthetically pleasing. i saw it and heard it and felt it. all.

"I am worshipping you," she says, panting now, "with my body." the connection between them is so awesome. even/especially though/because they don't speak of it, like ever, at all. it just makes what's UNSPOKEN between them that much stronger. i love when the connection between AH e&b is SO palpable, it rivals/replaces the singer/vampire connection between them in the books. the desire he that he feels, the want/need to protect AND to claim, is almost MORE canon than canon. i'm loving it.

also, the dream he had of her, wwith her and jake and him being called a cold one, it offered so much explanation. i'm learning so much and the journey you've taken me on has been SO good already and i can feel that it's only getting better and even more intense.

i can't WAIT to see where he gets the tattoo and what she thinks of it. i'm SO stinkin excited for the next update :)

loving and missing and adoring YOU,

hearts,
NZTwilighter chapter 3 . 9/12/2010
Wow. A great read so far, very interesting. I'm equal parts intrigued/captivated and confused/begging for more.

I'm not too sure how I feel about Rose and Edwards relationship and Emmett's acceptance (seemingly) of it all but my first thought is that it's a little sickening. Just my personal opinion on those kinds of open relationships. There's an emotional aspect that I find even more hurtful and betraying than the sex itself. :( I'm sure theres more to this that will be revealed later on, and maybe my opinion will change...

The Cullens... gosh, and what are they up to?

Authors have reasons why they do things that aren't always made obvious from the beginning and I can't wait to see why you've made decisions that are outside canon, like Bella not a Swan and without parents etc etc. It's always exciting discovering all the little twists and finding out WHY?
YellowGlue chapter 14 . 9/6/2010
the hints are coming clearer, and more often now - the clues, the puzzle pieces: "So if we follow the legend, your kind is intact, as with the others, because your people believe in them. And my kind became extinct because I forgot."

girl I don't know how you worked this all out in your brain but I am ALWAYS IMPRESSED by this story's inticasies. It's wonderfully complicated. I love and adore you for writing it.

I'm trying to draw out my reading of the chapters that are here because I KNOW I'll be impatient for the update lol. But it's so hard when you make it so good!

The bit at the end, the build up to it and then how loose he felt, how easy it was for him to just go to her and fall asleep, I felt it while reading it.

"Lulled by her warmth and scent, he soon falls asleep, unaware of the decision that he'd just made, and of those who felt it, loud and clear..."

GOOSEBUMPS! I love when what I'm reading gives me chills. That's awesome.

Loving this, so so much,

hearts,
YellowGlue chapter 13 . 9/4/2010
SHE'S IN HIS BED WITH HIM!

la !

Oh this was SUCH a good chapter bb. When he finally burst and said all those things - "You know I'd want to do more than see what's under there. I'd want to touch it, feel it... " oh he revealed so much! Not just about his own deeper-than-just-lust desire, but also about her to us readers. I figured her ink (which I love. I'm not reay into tattooed characters, at all - but this has got to be the *coolest* Bella out there) was for her tribe, but that it fits so well into his own story make it that much more awesome.

I'm so so happy this story continues! I'm closing my own eyes now and saving the next two chapters for tomorrow. I love how you're telling this and I want to savor it :)

hearts,
YellowGlue chapter 12 . 9/4/2010
I love that he picked up a chess set! Watching him in the store, all early morning sleepyeyed was awesome :)

this:e...laving him to his horrors while she watches over him may be strange, even creepy, and may even sting a little if he's honest enough about it but he knows she's not being cruel. At least, not deliberately.

I loved - it shows his shame and his fear, as well as his manliness. He's such a stand up guy in this story!

I'm going to attempt one more before bed :)

love love
YellowGlue chapter 11 . 9/4/2010
The plot thickens!

I was wondering this whole time how the quileutes fit into the situation!

Loved this also: Her hands automatically clutch at his shirt, holding on firmly as the strong wind threatens to blow her small frame away. Her hair whips around her face and he can see her stubborn determination not to cower. They start the frantic dash to the parking lot, with his arms around her.

I love how automatic their trust is to and for one another here, in this whole chapter really. That he helps with her ear mufflers and she's there for him to lean on. They're connecting :) :)

loving it!
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