Great fic has alot of potential and love the pairing its rare kudos

I Like This Story!

Could You Update Soon?

nice fic and i was way sad when jiraiya died i wanted to cry it was itachi all over again because itachi was a good boy

Oh my...I fear Ayame may have words with Naruto in the near future...maybe Pa will be nice and let him send s toad, so Naruto won't be murdered when he returns...

And you didn't have to yank me mate, though I do appreciate it _

Keep up the good work, and if you need or want a hand let me know ya?

hmm..nice line from the toad.

Very nice, though the chapters maybe a little short but still good. Please update soon _

nice story

damn no chance to say later to ayame that sucks so maybe he can send her a letter and a messanger toad HELL she just could be knock-up lol

Nice little start on a story you have here mate _ Naruto/Ayame is rarely seen, so this is going to be fun _

Especially if there is...fallout...from the nights escapades _

As to chapter length just find a spot that seems to feel right for stopping, I tend to still try and set a word number for my chapters, but if it just feels right to stop sooner, then it will be done _

Not sure what you have planned with the two advisors being there, but personally especially with her past with them, I would think that Tsunade wouldn't take any crap from them regarding someone important to her, but that's me _

Keep up the good work mate, if you need help bouncing ideas dont hesitate to hit me up, I find it rather enjoyable here.

update i hope u do update

you got fix the writing

get a beta to help u

and why is tsunade introducing fukusaku if hes the one that informed naruto that jiraiya died

also u should have at least wrote the reason he was being knocked to the floor

m la historia suena interezante, espero actualices pronto

pretty good so far.

I really liked this story. It shows the real emotion that Naruto would have felt when Jiraiya passed away. Keep up the good work.

It's a good start. I don't find much stories on how Naruto accepted Jiraiya's death so I think it has a unique touch. Please continue and update soon _