I loved this one! So romantic and poetic :) Great work!

I loved this! I could feel the conflict that Kari was facing and honestly wasn't sure what decision she should make. The figurative language was great. The wording was wonderful. I just love this whole story. The title fits perfectly as well, for many reasons. I love when the titles of stories make sense (because on this site they don't always). So yeah, just wanted to say that I love this story and that is why it is now on my favorites list.

this so cute and so.. so.. so... I DON'T KNOW HOW TO DESCRIBE IT! I hope you make more fics about this couple... this is one good fic!

~Honestly, I shall give you lots of love and cinnamon for this!

Great story. It is really well written!

Wow this was really good, I loved it. I loved how you had T.K use story and writing metaphors to explain to Kari how their story together should be. Wonderful Job!

Aww this is Pretty awesome stuff :D

Loved it!

it was so intense so deep so drama :D

haha I soo badly wanted to know how Kari left everything in her wedding :O

but oh well She came Back that's what matters ! Good work (Y)

Awesome!

One of the better stories that I've read

I apologize for such a late review, I've just encountered this story today. In my opinion, this is great, almost similar to the canon, with the only difference in the ending, but well said, every part of a story, the beginning, middle and the end, are all important... I enjoyed reading this, thank you for creating this story!

That was a great story! I agree there is definatly room to add on to this story. Like you wrote dont let the fear of perfection stop you.

P.S. I really have enjoyed all your storys! You should right a really long one. There really isnt long storys about Kari and TK. You wright so well and have great story lines and plots. I could see you writing a great long story. You got what it takes!

I like this one!

Why couldn't you do this with Learning Experience!

Or at least expand upon that story and end it like this one!

loved the story the holl last minte talk before the weding was a good read. In fact the holl story was fun to read I found it hard to do any thing els once I started reading it. GOOD WORK AWSOME STOREY LOVED IT CEEP UP THE OUT STANDING WORK.

sorry for any spelling mestacs!

Oh My GOD. That was pure awesomeness.
I was smiling at those flowery phrases that T.K. said. Those were just too good... Great story. Wonderful job! :D

*clap* *clap* *clap* I've read a lot of Takari, and this was the only one to make me shed a tear. If you're worried about tarnishing this story, don't worry no matter what happens, this will still stand as a great story. I really thought that Kari was going to marry the other guy, then TK would be heart broken then eventually move on and find his wife from the epilogue. I believe this is the frat story 8've read by you but it definetly won't be the last.

Oh my gosh. That was wonderful! So cute, and so elegant. Excellent work. I hope you continue to write Takari. :)

Beautiful. It is rare to find a one-shot like this and yet I don't know what to say. Good job, no great job. You defined the Takari reltionship, and although there was no Patamon or Gatomon to carry the story forward, there was no real need. We rarely find that one happy ending, but they did and you wrote it well.