very good

This is your best chapter yet. Brook doesn't get as much love as he should, so good fanfics about him are few and far between. I especially like the stories where it shows Brook still having bits of insanity here and there. He was isolated for 50 years! Being alone that long will have a huge effect on someone's mind. I also like how the crew proves to be there for him during those moments where his mind is broken. It really goes to show what a tight-nit group they are.

Keep up the good work, and I look forward to your next chapter.

Well, the change in writing style was obcvious but I enjoyed the progression none the less, this deep non-verbal connection that each straw-hat has is so undervalued that it should be given justice, and this recent chapter with brook was exactly what I was looking for, the simple nakamaship that we'reall looking for, the simple way that luffy may be the captain that holds them together but because there is also a deep underlying trust between pairs and triads of straw hats. Unlocking and writing this connection is your job, and job well done, especially on this latest one, the earlier ones were cute tho but you could alternate as you go on. There are so many more member communications, so many personality insecurities, so much care and protection for each straw hat member. Please make it happen. I'll be continuously supporting your story as I wait for the next update.

PS: I felt lucky enough to read it as you updated and changed the summary. What a pleasing surprise

Happy Christmas

I feel really bad for him, but unquestionably curious as to what cheese she used for that result, and what amount*evil grin*.

BRUH. I NEED MORE OF THAT TRUTH OR DARE STUFF. I NEED SFOR SANJI TO ACCEPT A DARE OR TRUTH ABOUT HIS EYEBROW. LIKE I NEEEEDDDD IT.

This was nice to read, had a bit of a heavy feel though. I don't think it's very out of character either. I do think Luffy might eventually ask someone, I'd think Zoro or Nami, I can see one of them teaching him how to swim.

This one was really nice. It was really interesting reading about Luffy's thoughts on swimming.

aw its cute

something about it is melancholy and casual and its really strangely cute

its hard to explain but basically its good you know

its a very fuzzy warm yet saddish kind of good

Aww.. it's kinda sad but I love this anyway..

You are just evil! So sick-wrong!...jk...

Luffy Luffy Luffy GO! Woohoo! Lol I love it a lot!

After reading your profile, I will feel bad if I didn't review. I really try to review some story, but it like I got nothing to say.
Aside from that. You forgot to write about Franky swimming.

Hahaha I loved that one! It's hard to remember that Luffy is strong, but he owned them both there.

This chapter was adorable, loved it.