I'll keep this review short, like you did with this chapter. Thank you for writing this. In a way, it helped me heal through so much of my own past because I understood some of the trauma the characters were undergoing. This is a work of art, and without it I am not completely sure I would have overcome a few of the things I did. It was therapeutic in a way that talking things out can't do. A silent prayer answered, I guess you could say.

I would just like to give you my compliments on this book. It is beautifully written, and is so, incredibly, inducing. The characters are so easy to get attached to, and their own struggles mesh with your own. This has been therapeutic for me, because it is helping me face and cope with a lot of the struggles I deal with on my own. I have gone through at least nine chapters today, but I think it is closer to fourteen. I lost count after my third trip into the kitchen for food, because they all became a blur of sequenced events. I want to thank you for writing this, because for the first time in months I felt euphoria while reading it, and almost cried from the happiness I felt because of it. I know you are unlikely to see this, given that it will be lost in the swamp of reviews and given this fanfic is over four five years old. But from the bottom of my heart, I wanted to say thank you. Reading this has helped me in ways that are indescribable, and I am finally starting to accept myself because of that.

I've read dark and grim, but this was perfectly executed. It's so... unreal? that it was believable. Astronomically suspenseful and drawn out; this is a truly beautiful piece of work. I had heard talk about your work for so long, but after reading it and getting to this point, I am truly left speechless. It is phenomenal, beyond words of praise. This chapter has everything you wish for in a dark novel, and so much that you didn't know you wanted until you read it! I couldn't stop reading it for more than the singular moments it took me to scroll the document farther down to keep reading it. Well done.

Henry Ford was a pretty awful dude. Not sure you want to quote him.

great story thank you

Just finished this story after two months of reading and I enjoyed every step of the way. The world you built was fantastically real and immersive. From the Pokémon to the humans to the cities and forrests, everything felt very real and believable. You described Pokémon and had their biology be different from any story I’ve ever read. Who would imagine a Magneton as a fly haha. I just wanted to say very well done on this story and thank you for creating such a piece of art.

Well Shuckle can deal 481,266,039 damage if it's at level 100 and fighting a level Combee, so the idea that it can save the day is a funny one.

So fucking good 3. Thank you.

Mewtwo?

Wow. Didn't see that one coming...poor guy.

Atleast gove the mc some useful Pokémon. Like Jesus if all he has are these even if they evolve their practically useless in later gyms or elite four

Why does the mc have such useless Pokémon I’m just bored I don’t even read through chapters, I just scroll through till something kinda interesting pops up

This guys an idiot it was happy since he was throwing it around like wtf the mc is dumb as shit

This is the third time i've reread Regret. Still, it pains me to see Adryan and Mia die.

Callum gets his happy ending but man is it bittersweet.

Thank you for your time and effort - I hope you have a great week ahead of you. :)

-Van

I absolutely hate this spoiler phrases at the end of each chapter.