Reviews for Harem's Betrayal, Naruto's Hate |
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monsterkillers124 chapter 4 . 5/29 Is there a part two or something or is it abandoned because it's been awhile since this ever got an update |
evanonymous chapter 5 . 5/26 ...okay what the fuck kind of plot is this even supposed to be? This is just sad to read and not because of the content. |
evanonymous chapter 4 . 5/26 Okay...decent premise with the whole "he gets betrayed and has to move forward" plotline? Decent. Other than that...this thing is a fucking dumpster fire of writing. |
Josh chapter 5 . 3/17 Mate it's been fucking years since you updated, it's 2020 now mate, you gonna update soon or what? But all in all fucking good story |
Josh chapter 2 . 3/17 Ino was gasping and sweating like a pig My fucking god bro the irony here is hilarious |
jackyfloresq2001 chapter 5 . 12/22/2019 can't wait for more chapters |
Gkff chapter 3 . 9/17/2019 Naruto most be really pathetic at fucking girls he buils a harem can't keep even on satisfied. |
monsterkillers124 chapter 5 . 5/17/2019 WHERE IS THE NEXT UPDATE PUT THIS THING UP FOR ADOPTION ALREADY |
Hey chapter 2 . 4/25/2019 Your mother was a whore who loved a good dicking. Even when she was roofied and being raped, she still had a fucking smile on her face. I sincerely hope the cunt is dead. It'd be a better fate than being the town bicycle. For what it's worth, the whore regrets not aborting you. Every fucking time the slut is not gargling some balls or drooling while being rammed into a mattress (or a dirt floor), she begs to be impregnated. She wants so badly to give birth to your replacement. She prays to every god out there that you'd die. Failure doesn't even BEGIN to capture what she feels about you. Your nothing but a disappointment who sits in front of a screen all day. Do your ol' mother a favor, and commit suicide. Kill yourself. Jump off a roof, shoot yourself, cut yourself, drink Draino, whatever, just fuck off from your mother. Bitch has already suffered enough raising you. Hehehehehehe |
daperbianchicomanda chapter 5 . 4/10/2019 How can tsunade talk lol |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/18/2019 dear writer please make more chapters |
monsterkillers124 chapter 5 . 10/29/2018 you said a next chapter but you abandoned the story never to return figures |
Monster King chapter 5 . 10/27/2018 Great story I hope you continue it soon |
lavi-kitsune chapter 5 . 9/30/2018 Looking forward to reading more |
kagome higurashi chapter 5 . 3/9/2018 please write some more. it's good. have naruto get his revenge. have him befriend itachi. |