Reviews for Working the Machine |
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freedragon chapter 2 . 5/19/2011 Please update! It's killing me not knowing what's happening next! |
freedragon chapter 3 . 10/25/2010 Epic. Please keep writing. Please do NOT abandon a story with so much potential such as this one. You are a great writer, please continue the story. |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/17/2010 Epic story man. I hope to see the new chapter soon. I can't wait to read how 2d and Noodle get together |
Bar chapter 3 . 5/13/2010 Hello, I am sorry for the late review. It's Haveba25 from Deviantart. I love your story, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I am hoping for some sexy stuff. But I also love how you write the emotional instability on both Murdoc and 2D. It's sad, vulgar and kinda pathetic at the same time. Anyway keep it up! |
rebew chapter 1 . 5/5/2010 i also got my wisedom teeth pulled I like the story |
Katkid chapter 3 . 5/2/2010 Oh, gosh, I just realized that you said the masked figure was at Kong Studios, not Plastic Beach. That's what I get for not reading more carefully. Anyways, chapter three...mysterious. I'm guessing that this is Noodle talking about her time in hell, and if so, I just want to give her a big hug. Looking forward to seeing more of this story (and really, don't worry if it takes some time to keep going. It took me THREE YEARS to update The Underground!) |
Katkid chapter 2 . 5/2/2010 Aha! I'm guessing the real Noodle has arrived. That should make things a bit...interesting. I wonder how she will react to the way Murdoc (and apparently, 2D) have been using the cyborg, or if she is even aware of the cyborg at all. |
Katkid chapter 1 . 5/2/2010 Wow; this is your first ffnet fic? I'm really impressed! You do such a marvelous job capturing 2D's confusion as to how he should feel about the cyborg. Also, 2D's not the only one who got the willies when Murdoc would "stare at 2D as if contemplating something." Br! |
eyedrihtkrats chapter 1 . 4/27/2010 wonderful! i love the how in character it is. very sexy. i cant wait for more. |
Vivi's Fan chapter 3 . 4/26/2010 Unf! Ever since you read that bit to me, I can't stop thinking about this story! I can't wait 2 read what else u have in store for this! ilu bby! |
StarMimi chapter 3 . 4/21/2010 Love it! |
Brovenger chapter 3 . 4/9/2010 -Flails- I DEMAND MOAR. D: |
HideSeekKeep chapter 3 . 4/9/2010 Intriguing! I'm VERY curious to know where this story is going now, especially since it appears you've done some major revamping of the storyline. This chapter has certainly piqued my interest even more, raising tons of interesting questions. I'm sending my support to you to keep on writing! |
vomitinXrainbows chapter 2 . 3/30/2010 That seemed awkward to write really xDD But anyway I love where the story is going and the end of chapter two...you would throw a cliff hanger at us D: such is the life of a writer , the most enjoyment is giving people cliff hangers xD. |
JemKat chapter 2 . 3/28/2010 :O ... That's all I can really say about this fic. I'm not sure whether I'm engrossed or just grossed out, but either way - damn. This is some well written robo-smut! :P More please? _ |