To be frank, I'm quite surprised Qui-Gon hasn't tried to haunt his wayward master by now. Not that he did in the canon universe, but that would've been quite a meme.

Dooku : Qui-Gon? How?
Qui-Gon : (sorry this one's gonna be a bit OOC) oh shut the fuck up and just let go of my Padawan and grandpadawan and get your sorry ass back to the light. You're not doing me any favour right now and I can haunt you for the rest of your life plus never tell you how to do this.

Well, that was fantastic. I read it as fast as I could and I super loved it. Thank you for writing it.

Gah! Wonderful fic. I've enjoyed this so much! Dooku is such an interesting character, especially with regards to obi-wan. Love it!

I... wow... I can't wait to see the rescue. And I hope Padme will be alright.

I love the comparison Padme made between Anakin and the baby and Obi-Wan and Anakin.

If Dooku is willing to use this kind of force on Obi-Wan, I wonder at the fact that he hasn't on Anakin before. Goodness knows the kid tried his patience enough for that.
I'm with you, Obi-Wan. I'm hoping Anakin actually does as he's told too.

I love how you write Padme.

So the dark side is gripping Anakin a bit too, I see. At first I thought his reasoning was a bit... trite when it came to why Obi-Wan shouldn't be as guilty as he feels, but that was the dark side, wasn't it?

This heart to heart cut straight to the soul. It sucks that it came to light in such a way, but one way or another, it needed to come out into the open. Now Anakin can maybe start to heal from that.

Oh my gosh, I... that was actually horrifying.

The comparison between the Jedi and the Clones was chilling and it's one that I kind of agree with. I thought the Jedi were wrong to forbid attachments.

I love the glimpse into Anakin's darker side, even if I can't blame him for his sentiments one bit.

It's so interesting how you differentiate between the levels of protectiveness Obi-Wan and Anakin feel for each other, with one being involuntary and the other being by choice. That was a really nice distinction to make. I'm loving this story already- I adore Anakin and I always love a good Anakin and Obi-Wan friendship. Your writing is clear and distinct, on a professional level, almost better than a professional level because some writers just have no idea how to say what they want to say and the story is the worse for it, but not this. This is absolutely incredible!

Shouldn’t Dooku be used to this because he was the leader of the Sepratis?

(For Chapter 10)
*Luke Skywalker yell*

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO