Beautiful... just one little constructive comment, it's Rhodey not Rhoney

Hey, this was very sweet and sad. The characters were very well done.

With regard to language, I only picked up on a very few issues with tense. Probably far less than in some fanfics from people who only speak English.

Well done!

Yay! (: I loved it! It definitely wasn't OOC, at least for me :D nice, I hope that you'll write more in the future!

Aw poor tony:( I loved how yu wrote what happened to his parents and the ending with Pepper:) Please continue this...it would be great to see him hire her and tey're perspectives of everything that's happened between then and where the movie began:)

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