Update this please~ I don't usually take a chance with uncompleted stories but I don't regret this one, the writing is very good. So please, please~ come back and finish this story.

PLEASE, PLEASE finish this! I knew I was taking a chance with an unfinished fic, but I really love it, and you lured me in. I’m sure you’re busy w RL and more important things, but this story showcases your talent! Come back and please finish!

please update this . i love this story. you are a great writer!

Please finish!

I never understood how Alice and Edward were friends in twilight. I could only see him tolerating alice. In this it seems to me that their friendship is even less likely. I just cant see a hard working businessman allowing his assistant to constantly meddle, badger, and whine at him the way she does. I would think that he would fire her ass for being a useless waste of space (as alice usually is). I just hate her character. I cant stand her personality. And I do hate meddlers.

Ow, I can't believe I did this to myself! Reading an unfinished fic that hasn't updated for a year! The thing is... You are the Mina Rivera who does LyricalKris banners aren't you? I'm a total fan of both of you haha. I'm in the facebook group i kind of ship your friendship (?) I don't know how I found your fics but here I am and I'm freeaaking curious about what's to come. I loved this fic so far. Pleaaase say you're still writing! See ya!

Bummer I came to the end. I am really enjoying the story!

You don't get a smiley from me you get words... Please I know that RL is probably kicking you tail feathers right now but don't leave a girl hanging? I am hoping to be able to read more about the charming Prince that you have portrayed here and how Artella is handling the burgeoning romance, so please feed this addiction of mine and continue on.

I just found your story. It is so very well written and the characters are very captivating ! I noticed u hadn't updated in so long . I hope u decide to get back to writing. Don't abandon this work. It is wonderful!

I'm laughing cuz Edward scoffed at the idea of seeing a person and the whole world stops... Lol! I hope you start writing again soon. I miss this story and have started reading it again so that means you have to start writing more updates. Right? Right! :-)

I loved that Bella saved herself!
Hope you updat soon :) 3

Loving it! Hope you keep updating. I'm dreading reaching the end of your published

Really loving your story. Hope you continue it

I'm really liking this story. Hoping you update soon

Edward is such a loving caring prince. So sweet. Welcome back. Still hanging in. Love your writing. Take care.