Smut?

Fuck, I regret my last review for being butt hurt, God I'm so stupid like wtf. smh

It's probably stupid but I feel a little offended as a Griffyndor, although I absolutely adore your writing. Not all Griffyndors are dumb and brooding. Again this was probably stupid. But this year I've gotten so much shade from being in the house I am. But whatever, loving the book already.

Ohh wooow that ending wow. :O I love it! I'm running off to read part 2 now. Thank youuu!

I am loving this story so much. I like how you move along the timeframes but it doesnt feel rushed at all. I love Harry talking to himself too. I think thats something he would always have done. :)

This sounds like it will be very good, I can't wait to read it.

LOVE. But when is Snape EVER going to pursue Harry instead? The relationship CANNOT be one-sided.

THIS STORY MAKES LIFE WORTH LIVING WITH ITS ...

Main Entry: titillate

Part of Speech: verb

Definition: excite, stimulate

Synonyms: amuse, arouse, entertain, grab, grapple, hook, interest, palpate, provoke, switch on, tantalize, tease, thrill, tickle, tickle pink, turn on

Notes: titillate means to arouse, stimulate, or tickle in a pleasant way; titivate means to adorn or spruce up

Antonyms: disenchant, repulse, turn off

LOL. I was trying to find the most awesome word to match what I feel and think of your fantastic story. I love it so much. Like loveing the fact that you woke up on a saturday and you CAN sleep longer, when you felt that it was still friday and you had to get up. Refreshing. Awesome.

You rule. This was brilliant.

A slight correction:

In hermione, Fred, George, and Harry's conversation early in the chapter, I think you mean borish (probably a made up word)

Boorish means rude, ill-mannered, etc.

You probably meant a variation of 'boring,' because you were talking about 'bores' earlier in their conversation.

Hello Cozy,

Harry is perhaps "such a girl" but he is also a teenager who knows nothing about human relationships (with the childhood that he lived, he is forgiven).

My Dear Cozy, thank you for continuing this story. I love it very much...

Forêt interdite

Hello, and sorry for the horrendously late review. I've got the flu, see, so my brain didn't quite function well enough to compile an OK review - probably still doesn't.

Anyway, I really liked the scene with Harry and Hermione here: for all that Harry is very intelligent, he's at times so caught up in his own emotions that he seems to lack an understanding of others'. Add that on top of the fact that he's so confused by his own feelings (understandably), you get a very bewildered Harry. And so I enjoyed the part where he finally seemed to figure things out, only to, well...

... All I can say is that that was a very mean cliffhanger. And a very clever one, of course. I'm very very curious about that... poem? prophecy? It certainly indicates much excitement to come in part two!

Thank you for the update! I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter - whenever it might come. )

-K.

Not a Cliffie! It can't end here so you have to get another chapter up soon. Please, please, please. I got so excited when I saw the posting of an update. If it helps I will send you some virtual homemade gooey chocolate chip cookies or brownies with rich chocolate frosting. Just please don't leave us like this! lol. Keep up the good work.

Very well written!

Severus! Oh god no! Not Severus! Why do you cast such woe unto your readers? Why do you cast away a main character like this?

Definitely anxious to hear why Severus is a bit off. Hard to believe the Death Eaters would be so strong with Lucius gone and odd old Tom didn't retaliate