I like how you made this because people over look the fact that it can be any emotion, not just rage. Good Job :)
Although in the series Kurapika was 17 but I'll accept it because it's a fanfic.

It would been cute if it was chapters.

OH MY GOD. I love this! :D

... how lovely !

I really liked this! Update soon (if you are...I cant tell with this endling, but I hope you do!).

This was so cute! I am such a Leorio/Kurapika fan! The ending was just perfect~ thanks for writing it. :)

aw

i love readin' yaoi just don't like witin' it! don't ask don't know...good story hehe -fan girl bliss-

*Excuse me for a moment while i go giggle like a fan girl XD

The narration is and simple but it worked well in bringing out the cuteness of the story.

That was so sweet!

Thank you so much, I just had this really depressing conversation with my friend and then I get to read this sweet fic, it made me smile.