This was a good story. Thank you!

Wonderful! Lucy and Tumnus stayed in character the whole time and the love and passion between them was beautiful. Great writing :)

This story was so sweet. I was so sad earlier when Lucy and Tumnus were separated! The situation was resolved beautifully.

I love this pairing so much! I also greatly enjoy realistic stories with them...thank you.

I really loved this! It was an amazing twist on a story that I grew up loving. I always wondered if something more developed between Tumnus and Lucy. Having a happy ending to their story was amazing, although I wish there could've been more, but alas, all good things must come to an end. :( I would've also loved an ending where Lucy never went home and the story of their love continued in Narnia, but then that would've changed the original stories and movies, so I'm glad you went with this route also. I'm grateful that you wrote this and allowed me, among many, to experience such a wonderful story that satisfied our weird curiousity in this unique tale of the Queen of Narnia and the faun we all loved.

I really enjoyed reading this! It was really amazing. It definitely kept me interested and put me through an array of emotions. It always upset me that Tumnus' story ended the way it did in the books and movies, so it was nice to read a twist on it all where he and Lucy get together and find a way to spend the end of their lives together while also keeping to important and true parts to the story laid out in the books and movies. Thank you for writing this!

I loved the story! It was so nice, although I’d prefer it if it had continued in Narnia and the Pevensies never left... Good job nevertheless!

I am SO IN LOVE WITH THIS. It's like Narnia meets the Magicians meets... my wildest dreams. Ugh.

The characterization is spot on and the intimate scenes are delightfully chaste but still provocative.

I loved the way you isolated Tumnus socially (his heterosexuality being abnormal, association with Jadis, knack for diplomacy) but it didn't turn him into a hermit. I don't even think for this Tumnus it would be possible. He is a faun after my own heart.

My feelings towards the Pevensies translated quite well from my limited previous knowledge. I always thought Peter was admirable but distant from my interests; Susan's a well meaning, maternal bitch; Edmund is good at heart and full of potential; Lucy is the hope for humankind incarnate. My only wishes would have been to see more of Peter in this world, especially with Tumnus, and to see how Lucy and Tumnus' relationship was received among the nobility.

I will say that I am not entirely fond of Aslan's character. A bit too frivolous for my tastes but understandable in the context of this story.

This story very much started in my heart as light and fanciful as one could imagine when pairing Lucy/Tumnus with Shakespearean comedy. And then it turned inexplicably into something far more tender and delicate and passionate and warm.

This was one of the most amazing stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Thank you so much for the opportunity to experience the lives of these characters. It takes an exceptional mind to turn out words that can move a stranger to tears. Great job!

Wow wow wow wow. Slow down Satan. Dont rip open a wound thats close to closing

Adorable

Too good!

Both funny and touching.

Too cute!

Love it!