Reviews for An Unexpected Beginning
Guest chapter 29 . 7/20
But wut happened to the Mac n chez?
Young chapter 19 . 6/23
Wait a sec, what does Gamakichi means by Naruto has died? Did I miss something?
Young chapter 18 . 6/23
Oh my God I cried when Naruto broke into tears
lavi-kitsune chapter 1 . 5/24
Love it a lot. Once I started reading, I couldn't put it down till I was finished
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 23 . 5/14
The kyuubi can absorb and give naruto nature chakra so that he can keep up sage mode indefinitely. He doesn't need clones to recuperate! That was old days.
dcfangirl4632 chapter 4 . 4/2
So you really CAN'T just give a baby solid food all of a sudden so in my head I can't help but picture angry Kushina in response to that
Night chapter 9 . 12/18/2019
It's cool how you thought about Sakura not being there. She is, after all, not part of a clan. Most people would just put her in the scene, not thinking twice about it.
lara5170 chapter 29 . 10/5/2019
Nobody went after the fifth enemy that threw the kunai?
lara5170 chapter 2 . 10/4/2019
He just fall asleep after the sealing. What about Kushina and the damage to the village and him being the Hokage? How can he just go home and go to bed?
Guest chapter 29 . 6/13/2019
hi
Anonymous Person chapter 22 . 6/7/2019
Naruto's damn Sexy no Jutsu could arguably be in the scroll of forbidden jutsu. Not because it's hard to learn but rather because it seems to have the capability of temporarily putting pretty much any male shinobi out of commission for a while.
Anonymous Person chapter 16 . 6/7/2019
Wow... so canon was a tragedy but this is practically equally horrific.
Sanzenin chapter 18 . 5/13/2019
Really dramatic
Guest chapter 31 . 4/5/2019
Hmmm *slithers off to read that sequel asap*
Guest chapter 28 . 4/5/2019
Ahahahahahaha I'm gonna enjoy those omakes.
*dodges the romantic fluff* eek ewe
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