Please update your story again soon!

This was a MUCH better story line than Twilight. I'm glad Kate got to kill Ari, as some sort of poetic justice, for him killing her in the show. Although, we did miss the Tony save when he pushed Abby out of the way... oh well. Kate lived! Tony's gonna be reasonably okay, so all's well that ends well. :D
Great fic. I loved the family dynamics that took place, and the suspense every time Tony got injured. And yay! No DiNozzo Senior! *claps lightly* although I've got to admit, the names are kind of questionable. Anthony, Caitlyn, Abigail, Timothy, Jennifer, Leroy Jethro, and the Donald "Ducky"? What's his relation? I mean, I know it says he's Jethro's brother, but he's Scottish! And Anthony is an Italian name! The Gibbs' are American! It doesn't make sense! But I digress...

This story was amazing. Absolutely astonishing. It was Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious! Loved it all!

I remember my dad doing the exact same thing Gibbs did in the car when I was younger. My dad's former Air Force, so would 'Drill Sargent Yell' me into submission sometimes, if I was acting out. But it was usually my mom doing the driving in my family. She prefers the control of the drivers' seat, she says. I remember one time in particular, when my younger sister ans I were Tony and Kate's ages, but I won't get into that. No use spilling my childhood onto the internet for complete strangers to read at will. ;) This is great though. It's really bringing back fond childhood memories of my sister swallowing a soda can tab. Or shoving a pony bead up her nose to, and I quote, "smell it". Good times, good times.

If Tony was in the ICU there is no way Kate, Abby and Tim were allowed to stay too.

Hi, I love your fic, I hope you continue soon with the fic, I love Gibbs / Tony partner, make a great couple, parent-child and romantically between them, I love this couple, especially the romance between them, I hope you keep doing fics of them, so still, thanks and kisses.

That was a fun read.

This is the by far the most wonderful story I've ever read about tony and gibbs. I really like it and hope that you'll still write stories and update if possible? I know that alot of people would like that, another story about when tony was younger?

Love your writing!

love the story please write more on it

more please. this is fantastic story. please update again soon. )

cant wait for your next story

Ahhhh I'm in withdrawal! Please update soon!

PLEASE update soon! This is my favorite story on this entire site!

I really like this series of yours - please can you give us another chapter - I just love Tony whumping and you write it so good!

I love how you handled the Ari situation. I was kind of worried Kate was going to die. Great job!

Aw, nice chapter. Those couple weeks from SWAK to Twilight to Kill Ari were tough, loved it from this universe. Hope to see more little kid Tony - I just re-read the sugar coma cereal chapter the other day. So adorable.