Reviews for iBe a Vampire
Guest chapter 15 . 4/11/2015
Name: Michael Derickson

Age when turned or current age if not vampire: 19
When turned
Height: 6/1

Weight:180

Hair color:black

Hair Length: short but with style

Background story: He was one of the smartest persons at his job until one day a strange man came up to him and bit him. He couldnt fight back so he bit the man out of fear. The man notice he tried to get him to stop but instead he just killed him and left. After that he came back but with a thirst for blood. Somehow he controlled himself and killed animals instead. That is when he met stephan and he explained to danny what happened to him. Danny shocked by what he heard decided to accept it. He later on trained with stephan to control his new abilitys and then seperated. They still keep in touch incase they need each other.

Why this character should win: He is a mysterious genius who could help with fighting and with gathering information if needed
Candyskull chapter 15 . 4/28/2013
I would like to enter for damons oc

name: Emilia-mae Evergold
age: 17
species: human
hair: brown ringlets
eyes: big and hazel
slim
Likes: candy rainbows unicorns vampires
dislikes: werewolves orange
favourite colours: black purple
favourite movie: dark shadows
i think she should win because she is crazy and unique and i just felt like giving you an idea as i love your story
GregandHollygirl chapter 15 . 6/11/2012
name: jordan benson

age:6

height 2foot6

weight20 pounds

hair color: drak brown like mom carly benson

hair length:1foot8

background story: creddie vampire love story

why this should win: cause is like her mother
TwilightForver2012 chapter 15 . 12/18/2011
Mate for Shelby.

Name: Jay Mukunda Dhruv (It's a Indian Name) He looks just like Beck from Victorious.

Age when turned or current age if not vampire: Vampire age 19 and years alive since being turned into a vampire would be 119 years as of 2011.

Height: 6' 5

Weight: 179 Ibs

Hair color: Black

Hair Length: Short

Family: Jonna: Father

Bhumi: Mother

Background story: Jay Dhruv father was white and his mother was Indian. His father was Jonna Michealson and was the son of a wealthy spice producer. Jonna's British family moved to India in 1872 when he was just 4 months old. Jonnas father wanted to be closer to his spice plant to keep a eye on things after one of the shipping boats crashed a few months ago. Jonna was rises in India his whole life. Because his family was so rich and powerful they had many servants to anttened them. One of Jonnas mother's servants had a daughter named Bhumi, who was just seven days younger than Jonna. One day, when both Jonna and Bhumi where both 6, Bhumi's mother brought her with to show her how to change the sheets around the mansion. When her and her mother reached a room and were about to clean Jonnas mother's bedroom they were surprised to find both Jonna and his mom standing outside waiting for them. Jonna's mother introduced her son saying she thought it would be nice if Jonna had a friend. Bhumi and Jonna grew up best of friends even though people disagreed that an English boy and a Indian girl should be together. When Jonna was 19 he was ordered by his family to return to England for schooling. Upon hearing the news Bhumi met with Jonna one last time secretly and after the meeting conceived Jay. Bhumi was worried about what people would think of her being unmarried and having a baby. Under pressure and stress she ran away into the forest. She gave birth to Jay and rised him in the wilderness. Jay had the greatest teacher ever, nature. One day when Jay was 16 he was cutting wood when he heard his mother scream. He ran to find her being tortured by some men. Using his ax in hand he killed all of them. Bhumi was greatly hurt told her son to leave India and to find his father in England. "What's his name mother?" Jay asked. " Jonna look for a man named Jonna," and with those as her last words, she died. Jay listed to his mother's orders and managed to somehow make it to England after 3 years of walking and stealing rides from people. In England, he was frowned upon by everyone by how he looked. But is wasn't hard to find his father. Jonna had finished school and became a well-known trader and salesman. Jonna didn't believe Jay when he said he was his son. He ordered Jay to be arrested without trail thinking that this Indian boy was out to steal his money. While in prison, Jay met a old man named Peter. Peter was different then anyone else in the prison he would stay away from the window, ask for only raw meat and try to drink the blood of the rats he would catch in the cell. One day, Peter said to Jay, " You know Jay. I've been a watching and I know that you are just a young boy. You need to live life unlike me who has been STUCK IN THIS CAGE FOR 40 YEARS!" he yelled. " Tell you what boy, I will make a deal with you. If you let me get one little taste of your blood then I will grantee that you will be faster, stronger and free. What do you say?" Jay accepted theses terms and let Peter drink a bit of his blood. Blah bhal bhal Jay becomes a vampire, escapes jail and kills his father. He lives in shadows for years before he moves to America. The end: I'm so boring:P

Why this character should win: Because I love Beck and Tori in Victorious :P
SweetStarre123 chapter 15 . 6/15/2011
Idk about the rest, but here's Sam's:

Name: Jason McLean

Age: 18

Height: 5'11

Weight: 190 lbs.

Hair Color: Strawberry Blonde

Hair Length: Spiky hair

Background Story: He has a reputation and has a history of being arrested, like Sam. He is not a really bad guy. He is on his own and falls in love with Sam.

Why this character should win: I have no idea. LOL I think this will be a good charcter for her though.
darck ben chapter 15 . 6/15/2011
what I need from you

name Ben Jones

Age when turned 17

hieght 6'7

weight 100 ponds

hair color blond

hiar length short

background story

got turned during world war 2
Evan chapter 15 . 6/14/2011
What I need form you:

Name: Evan Blane

Age when turned or current age if not vampire:16 when he was turn

Height: 6'3''

Weight:

Hair color:

Hair Length:

Background story:

Why this character should win:
TwilightForever10 chapter 6 . 9/27/2010
One of my friends told me to look at this story and I thought to myself after reading all 14 pages,"Wow, this story is amazing! It got me on the first page"! I love the Carly and Freddie parts. The story is unlike any other vampire stoires I've read in the past. Most times I see fanfictions based off of Twilight. Your's is different, in a good way, it's much like True Blood only better. I hope I get to see more chapters, more Creddie, and more awesomeness! :D Thanks for everything!
CreddieFan chapter 14 . 9/27/2010
PLZ KEEP WRITING!
Ninja Master chapter 4 . 7/4/2010
Another awesome ch!
Ninja Master chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
Awesome! I was hoping there would be iCarly/Vampire Diaires fic booyah!
RainbowShaimbow chapter 12 . 4/28/2010
Cool chapter anyways hope shelby will wake up in time
RainbowShaimbow chapter 11 . 4/28/2010
COOLEST story ever! and i mean it it scares me but i still wanna read more plz plz plz update any sooner
Carl Rahl chapter 11 . 4/27/2010
Cool set up.
Carl Rahl chapter 9 . 4/21/2010
I like the way you do fight scenes. I hope Freddie tells demon to shove it Cause I do think he will turn Selhby.
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