the promise of a lifetime. I cry...

Aww! Poor Sakura, you realize what you lost when it’s gone

So good and sad

I get it I get it I get it ;_;
Naruto, you're so pretty cool ;_;

It's really beautiful and heartbreaking :'(

I really love the way you didn't use proper grammar. It really just fit in with the entire letter. Very well done!

is now crying. Or almost, because I hate crying. waaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh
but this is like, I thought it was HAPPY and then, and then! asdfkj;
I hate this because it's so SAD and HAPPY at the same time and it makes me want to cry and I love it for the same reason.

This was really touching. :)

This is an amazing story! I admire your works, and I can't believe I haven't found you earlier.

Your use of only lower-case letters makes the story seem more intimate, it amplifies Sakura's feelings towards Naruto. The repetition of the word 'sunshine' also adds to the impact of the story.

Maybe you should change it to Sakura/Naruto instead of Sakura/Sasuke, because it gives the wrong idea about the whole thing.

I admit that I'm crying rivers right now. I feel that the fic's message and meaning bounced around in my heart (like a pinball), and finally settled in.

Wonderful execution and delivery, deeply emotional and realistic-you made her reaction to Naruto's death seem...right-, this story is definitely one of my favorites of all time.

I can't wait to read more of your fiction. You are really talented!

So sad!

I feel like i'm going to die from trying to choke back tears. I knew something is wrong and I was right.. Naruto died -_- great story though :))

I love .

So sweet and jerk!You made me cry!

Hahaha. It's I'm typing this,tears are falling from my eyes (and I'm laughing too. I'm so weird)

beautiful. it's gorgeous.

i won't quote parts that i love at you because it's probably annoying, but i'll just say i love the part where sakura goes, "when i look up at the sky, i'm going to think of you because you were the sun up there"

made me cry...thanks...i love crying (though it upsets my poor abused contact lenses)

i love it, keep it up!

i love how dramatic and angsty this is :'(

i also found the end note funny

im asian and i suck at maths too lol

aw, that made me want to cry, but it was really good, lol.

that was really sweet. it kinda made me cry. well, almost.

(about being asian and bad at math, s'okay, cuz i'm asian and i suck at it too. which is kind of bad. cuz my parents are math freaks.)

-epic bunneh-sama