Honestly I did not understand everything (the end stay a secret for me!). My english is not as good as I thought.
But for what I understood, Tyki stay a bad guy as I love him, and Lavi do his best to dominate him but failed. I like dark characters so I liked your fic even if I don't got it!

thank you

Yup, Tyki is definitely a devil in disguise. And very confident one I must say. ‘’ "Ask, then. Perhaps your pretty face will loosen my lips.. Or my belt.’’ That part was great! Ahh yes, and I liked the sentence when he asks Lavi to be his meal. Muhahhaha..of course he will, just strip him and serve him with the strawberries and icing. Poor Lavi, he is like a little fly caught in spider’s web but without realizing it really...

I am just not sure what have happened in the end. I read it 3 times, then went to the beginning but I am still a bit puzzled. I mean I have this picture in my head how this ends but I am not sure if I am right. It can even be an open end with many possibilities left. :) But I like the version in my head the most; it is wicked, smexy and has a happy end. :D

I absolutely love what you did here! Especially how Tyki remained dominant throughout even though he was the one caught. Poor Lavi didn't have a chance did he?

Wow, your stories are all awesome! Well, I just started reading your stories through recommendation(did I use the right word!) I'll definitely read your stories and review them! Now if only me stories were as good as yours... Thank you

*exhales slowly* Migod this was DELICIOUSLY DARK! just like sinister dark chocolate x3 my favorite kind~!

you're good at the dark stuff.

Is it Allen you killed? I'm not really understand what happen here though ()

Gaarin: Kya! Lucky stories make me happey :3 Especially smexy ones like this! Keep it up! *thumbsup*

I like the way this was writen, and also how Tyki talked to Lavi. Don't know why but I love when one person taunts the other.

I'm confuse too. when did they start? who's the dominant one? i like it, but there's a lot of confusing parts. the end is also confusing. what happened? i think Lavi extended his hammer right? was Tyki lefted behind?

I'm confused, when did they start having sex, what are they talking about at the end, and did lavi just explode? well besides that i like your style. i think it was probably confusing because the plot switched too quickly, so i don't know maybe work on your pacing? but yeah it was still wicked sweet.

:D

I already replied to this xD but I guessed reviewing also reviewing here wouldn't hurt. xD

The reason why I usually don't read dark stuff it's cuz it drains me...emotionally. Or you can say also that I am (however I like to deny it) romantic (even sappy-but NOT BY MUCH...depending on pairing and plot) at heart. But this...was good and sexy and so well written that I can say...I enjoyed the read. ;D

Good job, God-sama :D